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It made sense to me too - mostly. It did hit me and I felt it was powerful but slightly mysterious too which I love. I really liked the pearls of love verse as it suggested the happy outcome that happens when writers block is unblocked. Excellent Poem

Comment Written by GowerHug on 28-Jul-2018

Victor Pauline Reports - Part V by cwebb

Excellent

Really well written and believable. I was gripped by the chapter and would happily read more. Interested to know what happens next. Your main protagonists are real and their personalities really shone through. Great stuff :)

Comment Written by GowerHug on 28-Jul-2018

Kill Mother--A Shrink's Solution by Spiritual Echo

Excellent

Wow, this was gripping. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Very well written with realistic dialogue. Very interesting plot with a great twist at the end. Excellent!

Comment Written by GowerHug on 28-Jul-2018

Dishonest Man by HarryT

Excellent

Wow, a really good 3 cubed poem with very topical content. Syllabic pattern flowed and came across as a clear call to action. Well done and good luck in the contest �???

Comment Written by GowerHug on 28-Jul-2018
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Seven Words or Less... by karenina

Excellent

Really liked this and sorry you were too late for the competition. Love the word play here and the overall meaning. Lots of mean8ng in just 7 words. Well done.

Comment Written by GowerHug on 28-Jul-2018

Morning Delight by Y. M. Roger

Excellent

Brilliant. Actually did LOL here. If I had a 6 star I'd give it for this. Love this funny, sunny story. I hope you win your contest - you deserve to for this. I'm a fan!

Comment Written by GowerHug on 27-Jul-2018

A Wild, Windy Night by duchessofdrumborg

Excellent

A really interesting piece of writing. When I started reading I thought it was going to be creepy fiction (which I love). But, it turned into a very good description of writer's block and eventual inspiration. I really liked the fact that you say the night actually wasn't dark and stormy but in reality it was, using it as the metaphor for your block - in my head, I see the storm breaking as your inspiration finally comes. And love the sound of your cat too.

Comment Written by GowerHug on 27-Jul-2018

Of Dragons and Industry by lyenochka
Chapter 7 of the book Looking for Home

Excellent

I really liked this - the prose and the haiku. So interesting and beautifully written. Love the line where myth and daily life are entwined - very evocative. Images really help develop your writing. Overall an excellent piece of work.

Comment Written by GowerHug on 27-Jul-2018

A Fading Voice by Ethan Franklin

Excellent

Simple yet profound and topical in light of global warming etc. Very clever to be able to express so much in so few words. Best of luck in the contest.

Comment Written by GowerHug on 27-Jul-2018

On the Road to Me...Again... by Mrs. KT

Excellent

What a lovely poem, and one I think most readers will empathise with. The structure of the lines compliments the journey that is referenced, with Today and Instead having separate lines which gives the words more impact and power. The untrodden winding path also seems to be part of the poem's shape. Really lovely and best of luck in the competition.

Comment Written by GowerHug on 27-Jul-2018
Read and reviewed with blinders on.