God and Man
A 4 Line Poem Contest Entry in 1, 5, 5, 9 syllable
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Krissy Johnson

dance, my darling daughters by flylikeaneagle

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This is so beautifully written from the heart, it flows with faith, dedication and the love a mother has for her children. The song I hope you dance by Lee Ann Womack is exactly what this poem is, so beautiful and so true. We are blessed who believe in the one and only true God :) He alone is our source for all we need :) thank you for sharing and please keep writing :)
Comment Written by Krissy Johnson on 18-Dec-2018

Don't Give Me, Merry Christmas! by victor 66

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This is very cute! and meets all the rules for this contest, good writing and clever :) Your photo to go with it is perfect. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written by Krissy Johnson on 09-Dec-2018
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Pain of a Ghost by Tara Kandece

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This work flows with emotion and feelings that are hard to describe. You did a wonderful job with this work. it is a subject no one wants to talk about, but a very real subject that touches so many lives. An exceptional job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written by Krissy Johnson on 09-Dec-2018

Son by meeshu

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This is so beautifully structured with inner strength. We never know the impact peoples lives have on us. Sacrifices made, some we see, others we don't. They go far and beyond what we could even imagine. This is an excellent free verse poem full of emotion and trust. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written by Krissy Johnson on 20-Nov-2018

God's Mind by Alexander E Poet

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I love the way you started and ended this poem, the photo to go with it shows to me that God alone is our provider. You leave no one out making us all accountable. This work flows with interest and emotion. We all have to question and wonder with the signs we see daily, we are no doubt deaf due to all the noise in our lives. This is beautifully written, thank you for sharing your talent!! I find it inspiring and encouraging :)
Comment Written by Krissy Johnson on 20-Nov-2018

Focus Focus Focus by kiwijenny

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This is a beautiful spiritual poem! very encouraging, it flows with both structure and positive emotion. I can feel where you are coming from. I had to come back from a dark place and the scripture Fear not for what can man do to you helped me to get through. Also He has not given me a spirit of fear, but of power, love and a sound mind :) thank you so much for sharing your talent. Very comforting and inspiring read :)
Comment Written by Krissy Johnson on 18-Nov-2018

You're His treasure... by royowen

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This is beautifully structured and flows with emotion that we are indeed valued and treasured. Your poem flows perfectly into the truth that we are created in His very likeness and image. The choice for your ending is perfect. Pride comes before destruction and a haughty spirit before a fall. Just when we think we are something we are nothing without our Father :) Well done and thank you for sharing this masterpiece!
Comment Written by Krissy Johnson on 18-Nov-2018

O My God I...... by Alcreator Litt Dear

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This is a beautiful spiritual poem strongly structured on the word of God. Excellently written and flows with faith and emotional meaning of trust in an unwavering faith in your Lord. Very encouraging and a reminder of how powerful the word of God truly is :)
Comment Written by Krissy Johnson on 18-Nov-2018

The Saddest of Poems by DragonSkulls

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This is a great nonet poem saying exactly what you wanted to say in the correct form. The photo goes very well with your poem. It is well structured, and flows with emotion. Very well done.
Comment Written by Krissy Johnson on 18-Nov-2018
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Love abides by zanya

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This is a wonderful nonet poem, it is beautifully structured, emotional, and absolutely love changes not at all amongst our world. This is very well written, and I find myself reading it again.
Comment Written by Krissy Johnson on 18-Nov-2018
Read and reviewed with blinders on.


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