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Michael McCottry Bell Jr

My love set me free by Meia (MESAYERS)

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Lovely flow with great imagery and rhythm. I feel there was only one slight hiccup in the meter on the line "But then one glorious day..." just seemed to rattle when it left my tongue. Other than that the piece was well done. I am a sucker for love/romance poems so I decided to hunt through the category. Hope you are staying safe be well
Comment Written by Michael McCottry Bell Jr on 30-Mar-2020

Passion's Refrain by Y. M. Roger

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Very sensual with great imagery the artwork portraiture fits perfect I liked the rhythm throughout and the rhymes definitely gave it a musical feel while reading excellent job
Comment Written by Michael McCottry Bell Jr on 29-Mar-2020
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Breezes... by royowen

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I love this Roy it is very detailed and blends a wonderful tune with wonderful images. It is nice that you always write songs with your writing and praises to God. Truly enticing Thank you as always for doing what you do,


Michael
Comment Written by Michael McCottry Bell Jr on 29-Mar-2020

Blue Hosta by Dolly'sPoems

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Your flower Sonnets and such really make me wish for flowers to bloom quickly this spring. I absolutely love the story you tell as you pen them. I see them growing right in front of me from the imagery and I always love the drawing you place. Thank you so much Dolly for making my morning,

Michael


PS I like the information you leave on them in the notes
Comment Written by Michael McCottry Bell Jr on 29-Mar-2020

My Cherry Tree by Dolly'sPoems

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This is so pretty and the story it tells as you penned it makes it even more. I adored every word of these. It has great imagery and its like reading a story in your mind. The art is terrific that Isabella drew. What a blessing to read this morning. Stay safe Doll,

Michael
Comment Written by Michael McCottry Bell Jr on 29-Mar-2020

Ann's Key by Janice Canerdy

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This is sad but gives hope at the end. One of the touching lines I read was

"Here's you with the ribbons you won at the fair
and pictures of Daddy back when he had hair!

That brought a smile to my face. Such a touching piece. I truly hope you stay safe I am praying for you and you're family Sal

Michael
Comment Written by Michael McCottry Bell Jr on 29-Mar-2020

Of Distance and Resolve by Mrs. KT

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This is the winner! This is power! This is inspiration KT! I love this and you have mastered this with a beautiful message. What a loop contest entry I can picture Winston Churchill or MLK Jr or anyone with a leader's inspirational voice reading this! I sugar cote this not, but you should try tweeting, putting this on facebook or connect with some sort of social media and have every leader of a nation read this to their people. I do not BS that. I am so greatly touched by this These words are beyond stars KT

Please consider

with love,


Michael
Comment Written by Michael McCottry Bell Jr on 29-Mar-2020

Loss Of Words by l.raven

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This is a touching piece. Sometimes we all are at a loss of words I hope the Lord fills youre heart with joy. I think however sometimes he wants us to search even deeper within ourselves for things. He will always make a way if we can't though :)

Many blessings

Michael
Comment Written by Michael McCottry Bell Jr on 29-Mar-2020

The Mystical Snowy Owl by Pam (respa)

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I like this piece and learned something about one of the owls in nature The owl sure looks beautiful you made the poem stand with your background and picture colors i've never attempted a Nonet

I like the imagery you made with your descriptions it was like I could see the owl flying in front of me thank you for sharing
Comment Written by Michael McCottry Bell Jr on 29-Mar-2020

Seasons Come and Seasons Go by Jannypan (Jan)

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This is beautiful I really like the imagery and the style of this form your words are all well chosen and have expressed a beautiful meaning thank you for sharing best wishes

Michael
Comment Written by Michael McCottry Bell Jr on 29-Mar-2020


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