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Ada Jewell

Endless by Sandra Ludwick

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This is a great entry for the contest. I have loved reading how many directions two small words can evoke. Words have power, neither numbers or size compare, nice job on your entry. Good Luck
Comment Written by Ada Jewell on 02-Aug-2019

Killing The Ripper Chapter 11 by Thomas Bowling

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As usual, your story is riveting and leaves the reader wanting more. Reading your writing is a joy. You are simply fun to read and I am always left wondering how to review great works, other than to say "great job."
Comment Written by Ada Jewell on 31-Jul-2019

Drowning Sorrow by Dolly'sPoems

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Sadly; I'm afraid many of us know this person. It heart breaking to watch one start with drowning their sorrow, but it's never too long before they have drowned their soul. Well done!
Comment Written by Ada Jewell on 28-Jul-2019

Sandwiched Between Generations by lyenochka

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I love the sandwich analogy! The words are few, but thought provoking. As my generation prepares for retirement, I work daily with brilliant young generation that teaches me so much! Great job
Comment Written by Ada Jewell on 28-Jul-2019

A Turn of Events by Chip Kuzborski

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I love this, what a great job you have done. I believe the words
"The future's uncertain, and the end is always near." have caused many of us to do a " cautious U-turn and heading home." Very well captured.
Comment Written by Ada Jewell on 25-Jul-2019
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Outside The Poets Box by Diana L Crawford

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I think it's a wonderful and hopeful poem. I love your reference to the use of simple words. We sometimes try to hard not to bore, but the simple words seem to say so much more.
Comment Written by Ada Jewell on 24-Jul-2019

Bring the sunshine in by Sandra du Plessis
Chapter 36 of the book Little Good Morning Quotes

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This is beautiful, a blessing for everyone and each day we are blessed with. Life can get hard, this is a great reminder to find beauty in each day we are given.
Comment Written by Ada Jewell on 24-Jul-2019

First of the Double Murders by Thomas Bowling
Chapter 9 of the book Killing the Ripper

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Hi there,
This is a chilling read for sure. You are such a fantastic story teller, and yet you are able to show your story so well. Great job as always.
Comment Written by Ada Jewell on 24-Jul-2019

My Crime and Your Punishment by LisaMay

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Phew, I made it through. This was a bit over worked for me. It was choppy and didn't flow but the general idea was very creative. You are very extremely talented. Good luck with your entry, I'm sure it will do well.
Comment Written by Ada Jewell on 23-Jul-2019
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Time And Time Again by evesayshi

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Deep and thought provoking words. Very well said, great talent in thoughtfulness and expression. The font is difficult for me to read, but that's just me. Great job!
Comment Written by Ada Jewell on 23-Jul-2019


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