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Zing by Maria Millsaps

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Hi Maria,
A simple line that works the
Imaginations and ones mind,
"Its simple you plus me
take a step and we connect,"
and a hand full of fruitful love
I love that its so few lines and yet...you manage to get across
that if you and me come together we will have chemistry and a fruitful relationship, "I think that's what you are saying with your picture also to back up your text words.
But anyway your statement is beautiful and pure thank you for sharing Good Luck in this Competition
Written :10-07-2019

Earthpoet
Living In Faith

I see and defently what i read
Comment Written by Earthspoet on 09-Jul-2019

Serengeti by Dolly'sPoems

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Hi Dolly,
I just read your poem and I fallen in love with it especially these lines even my fiancee
Had to say Wow!
Well done !

As hunger bares
its teeth to flesh,
a meal so fresh
and death is quick
atasty lick
but others waiting in the wings
hyenas sing
and steal her prize
to fight not wise

How strong these your words
are
Comment Written by Earthspoet on 07-Jul-2019

God Is Green by Raffaelina Lowcock

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Hi Raffealina,
This is a most beautiful poem
I love your choice of words
And sentences like
Who holds the ocean from covering the Land
Why do you think there so much sand
You can't change what God has planned
If God has deemed what is out of hand.Wow now that is
Poetic poetry
So beautiful your line of words so relevant to you human race for an awakening
And realisation of what we need to do how we need to act
Thank you for sharing this
Exceptional well written poem
Good luck! In this Competition
Written:06-07-2019

Earthspoet
Living In Faith
Love and Hope


Comment Written by Earthspoet on 05-Jul-2019

The Beauty of Respect by Diana L Crawford

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Hi Diana,
I really love the sound of this poem. You could equate it to love one or freind look after them treat them well nurture them and you will reap the reward of their respect
Well done ! in your translation
Good Luck! In your writting
Written: 28-jun-2019

Earthpoet
Comment Written by Earthspoet on 28-Jun-2019
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Heavens Tears by Aussie

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Hi There,
Aussie I love this poem for it really draws a picture of doom, and gloom and amageden.
Bruised clouds wow! It gives a feeling if clouds that has been contaminated by all whats going on around and has absorbed all the toxin
I was scared within in your poem
Well done
Aussie In this your poem I really felt that you have achieved your vision and aim
Good Luck!
Written:21-jun-2019

Earthspoet
Living In Faith
Comment Written by Earthspoet on 21-Jun-2019

Ode To My Father by Diana L Crawford

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This poem is rhymic with its flow, it "rings so true" with the many funeral I have attended
and the ones that I have not attended even if I was not.
There in the physical with the gathering crowds at the grave side I always think of the day that they are being burried or cremated your spirt reaches out to them
And these hands that cannot reach him /her
Has now turned into the hands of God,b and they now Reside in the house of the Lord ! Most powerful poem

Earthspoet

God Bless You
Diana
Comment Written by Earthspoet on 19-Jun-2019

It's The Dance by moongirlwriter

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Hi Moongirlwritter
Not as easy as some may think a six word poem
And you used all the right And tight six words
"Defiying Gravity with Grace and Balance"
If you was describing someone and we had to guess what their profession was
This would be a great sum up
For a bally dancer
Good Luck !
In this Competition
Written:08-05-2019
Earthspoet
Comment Written by Earthspoet on 08-May-2019

Resurrection by Miss Sherry

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Hi Mis Sherry,
"Wise men seek him still"
Gosh ! After two thousand years Wise men will always look for Jesus and should always wonderful so strong
And poiuniot Good Luck !ritten 08-05-2019
Earthspoet
Earthspoet
Comment Written by Earthspoet on 08-May-2019

Secure in His Love by Miss Sherry

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Hi Miss Sherry,
Forgive me for the length of time.
Anyway yes I like the sound of this your "Easter thoughts"
"To walk in his Grace takes faith" I love just love that line
"His risen Saviour born to bring us Grace" WOW ! So powerful ???
Thank you for sharing this Miss Sherry
Good luck ! IN this Competition
Comment Written by Earthspoet on 08-May-2019

Stand in Glory by Miss Sherry

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Hi MISS SHERRY,
This poem I just read
and I must say I fell in love;with it .
The gift that you speak of
you are so right, "words are a
Powerful thing" and place in the right place with a deep or even light subject within the right
context and sprinkled with added emotions Gosh ! Lord you have a Great and Wonderful poem as you do MISS SHERRY ! "You really do" we all have our own Unique style and you do well done I love it and God Bless You
and your work
Earthspoet
Written : 08- Apr-2019

Comment Written by Earthspoet on 07-Apr-2019


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