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Candace Nola

Please, Sun by Chip Kuzborski

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Well done. Short. Sweet and to the point. Meets requirements. Word choices were on point. Reminds me of the same short prayer we all say when spending time in the sun. "Please don't burn me!" Loved it!
Comment Written by Candace Nola on 10-Apr-2019

Empowered by Sandra Leon-Gonzalez

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This was good. Met the requirements. Imagery was good. It flowed well overall. Sentiment being expressed met the topic requirements. Solid entry. Well done.
Comment Written by Candace Nola on 04-Apr-2019
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

What Happened by Willie P. Smith

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This is a beautiful sentiment. And I have often wondered the same thing. The imagery is beautiful, great rhythm and flow. It expresses the desire for a time that we seem to have lost. I wish more people knew the full meaning of love and what those vows truly mean. Well done!
Comment Written by Candace Nola on 04-Apr-2019

Not In His Image by elpsog

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Imagery is good. The rhythm and flow of this are good as well. Subject content might be a bit off putting for some, as is the authors note line. Does not show tolerance for a diverse world. I feel as if you are trying to say that many need a wake up call and that is most likely correct but maybe it could be worked on to reach more people in need rather than being alienating of the very same audience.
Comment Written by Candace Nola on 04-Apr-2019

A sad Christmas by JudyE

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I loved this. Very creative. Sad Christmas indeed, the poor fellow. Hunting can hold some tragic outcomes, that's for sure. This was a well written piece, wonderful descriptions. Imagery was on point. Great job!
Comment Written by Candace Nola on 04-Apr-2019

Oh, no...coffee! by Chip Kuzborski

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Well done, Chip! Humorous! Great word choices, good rhythm and flow. The artwork is a great selection too. I really enjoyed reading this! Keep up the great work.
Comment Written by Candace Nola on 04-Apr-2019

Reflections ... by dejohnsrld (Debbie)
Chapter 1 of the book Reflections ...

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Very nice sentiments being expressed here. I love how you plan to base your verses on spring and the time of renewal. Always an excellent subject. I look forward to reading the poems.
Comment Written by Candace Nola on 03-Apr-2019

Morning's Peaceful Panoply by Y. M. Roger

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Nice flow and beautiful imagery. Very expressive. Lovely verse to welcome spring. Really nice to read. Look forward to more of your work soon. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written by Candace Nola on 02-Apr-2019
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

C.C. Dodge by Chip Kuzborski

Exceptional
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Chip, well done! This was an incredible story. Well written, detailed, well developed characters. Just the right amount of tension and intrigue to keep the reader engaged. Perfectly written and well suited to CC's character. I could visualize the characters, their place in the town's life, their roles. I absolutely loved this. Great job!
Comment Written by Candace Nola on 22-Mar-2019

Love by Design by Jannypan (Jan)

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Great poem. Heartfelt words and express. Great word choices to convey the feelings. I thought that this flowed very well and I loved the artwork too. Great job on this piece. I look forward to more.
Comment Written by Candace Nola on 20-Mar-2019


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