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Randa Dayle

My Toy Story by Mark C. Marine

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Yes, what is a Kotex?? Hehe! haha! That story was totally hilarious. Thank you or sharing it, and the writing is great! Keep on sharing and making s laugh!!
Comment Written by Randa Dayle on 01-Aug-2019

Shining Firmament by Kerri Sullivan

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Yes, it does. Don't you love how it seems to change its shape, and how it glows on the night of a full moon? Great poem and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written by Randa Dayle on 01-Aug-2019

The Curse by susand3022
Chapter 14 of the book Aurora and Alicia

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You and your dancing girls are so cute and charming! Did you fashion one after your niece? I'm glad we are both back on. I'll be adding some new chapters to mine as well!
Comment Written by Randa Dayle on 01-Aug-2019

River Trek by Brooklyn J. Frances

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What a fun poem about walking. The creek looks absolutely refreshing.
MY FAVORITE LINE...
When I saw a spider through tall grass creep
Barring the way between me and the moss.
Comment Written by Randa Dayle on 30-Jul-2019

Yesterday....Today by Pearl Edwards

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Good job on writing for 10 minutes with no editing. That poem made a lot of sense, and I am glad you have some wonderful children, and that back yard is amazing!!
Comment Written by Randa Dayle on 30-Jul-2019

A Nightly Occurrence by Y. M. Roger

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How cute and charming. I never find much to critique, but I always enjoy your wit and your flowing writing. I hope you always find joy in your stories and poems.
Comment Written by Randa Dayle on 30-Jul-2019

Whispering Dreams by poetwatch

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Wink! Wink! I want you too! I write a lot the same...meaning I don't know what I'm writing until it spills out. That's called being a pantser, a writer that writes from the seat of your pants!!
Comment Written by Randa Dayle on 29-Jul-2019

meteor showers by Tanvi Pauddar

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I love meteor showers.. how cool. Thanks for sharing your fun three-line poetry. I think you have written a very nice one. Good luck in the contest!!
Comment Written by Randa Dayle on 29-Jul-2019

The Saint? by Kelly Alblinger

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Wow! You are an inspiration! You have taught me about thinking more about the other person than yourself. I think that is what understanding truly is. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written by Randa Dayle on 29-Jul-2019

What Am I To Do? by Tootie

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Oh, haven't we all felt that emotion! Great poem and congratulations on the awards. Thanks for sharing, and may you continue to keep on writing well.
Comment Written by Randa Dayle on 28-Jul-2019


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