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Final Rescue by susand3022
Chapter 21 of the book Aurora and Alicia

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I'm sorry the story is done...I enjoyed it immensely. I hope that you do more with it. It would be great as the first installment in a series of books that attempts to solve the mysteries behind fairy tales. So many of these stories have aspects that could be delved into deeper. "The story behind the story." Kids would love reading them, and their parents would love reading along. I'll have to get back to you regarding what I decide about FS, but whatever will be, I wish you the best. Keep writing!
Comment Written by Carla Trinklein on 26-Feb-2020

The Little Man by susand3022
Chapter 20 of the book Aurora and Alicia

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You are keeping the suspense going right to the very end! Well done. Although I think the King and Queen might want to be wary of any gifts given to them by their future sons-in-law. They haven't been treated well and may be carrying a grudge. Here's a question for you, if I did let my membership temporarily lapse, would my page disappear and would I lose the work I have stored in my portfolio? And can you renew on a monthly basis rather than yearly?
Comment Written by Carla Trinklein on 26-Feb-2020

Going Home by susand3022
Chapter 19 of the book Aurora and Alicia

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The princesses were brave, weren't they? If fool hardy to take a chance like that every night. It's good that they are also so kind to Mirela's family. You've turned them into well-rounded people I'd like to know. Have to get lunch for my kids now, but I'll read the rest later. Still trying to decide what to do about my membership. I may stay on but on a more limited basis. I should have more time to write and review in the summer, and I hate to give it up altogether.
Comment Written by Carla Trinklein on 26-Feb-2020

Dinner and a Show by susand3022
Chapter 18 of the book Aurora and Alicia

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I wish I had staff to clean my house for me like the maids charged with cleaning the East wing after years of neglect. You think of every detail, don't you? No, 12 princesses wouldn't want to be locked up in a musty, abandoned wing of a palace while they pretended to be missing.
Comment Written by Carla Trinklein on 26-Feb-2020

Revelations of Goodwill by susand3022
Chapter 17 of the book Aurora and Alicia

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I find myself with a day off due to a snow storm and thought I'd try to finish your book. You are wrapping this up very neatly! It helps to have a king and queen on your side, a lesson Britain's Harry and Megan would do well to remember, no? ???
Comment Written by Carla Trinklein on 26-Feb-2020

Truth At Last by susand3022
Chapter 16 of the book Aurora and Alicia

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It seems I was behind... I hadn't read this chapter yet. I will have to read the others as I can over the next week! Still such a fun story! I'm enjoying the plot development very much.
Comment Written by Carla Trinklein on 05-Jan-2020

Life With A Glass Fitter by LisaMay

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Looks like you've hit upon another clever idea for romantic plays on words. Your imagination, paired with your command of English, is a double edged sword! Sorry I've missed so much. I haven't been on FS much the past couple of months, not sure if I will renew in March or not. Work I'd just taking too much of my time. I'll see how the next couple of months go, but I wanted you to know how much I've enjoyed your work and I wish you the best in the new year.
Comment Written by Carla Trinklein on 04-Jan-2020

Cloud-Watching by Y. M. Roger

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Only you can teach science with such artistry! A beautiful poem. I'm sorry I've misssd so much of your work in recent months. Just not sure if I'll decide I can renew FS in March when it comes up for renewal. Work continues to consume me this year. We'll see how things go in the next couple of months, but I want you to know how much I enjoy reading your work and I wish you the best in the new year.
Comment Written by Carla Trinklein on 04-Jan-2020

A Mysterious Object by susand3022
Chapter 1 of the book Aurora and Alicia

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So you are backtracking? I didn't miss the ending, did I? If so, let me know and I will find it on your portfolio. I have not been active on FS in the past few months...my teaching job is eating me alive this year. Not sure what I will do about renewal in March... but I do want to see this story through! I hope you are doing well in the new year.
Comment Written by Carla Trinklein on 04-Jan-2020

To My Secret Admirer Finale by Sally Law

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Such a nice touch to have them marry in Will's father's room, with him officiating! Also nice that it all happened five years ago, so that we could have a glimpse into their lives today. A completely satisfying story, very well told! Thank you!
Comment Written by Carla Trinklein on 04-Jan-2020


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