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Carla Trinklein

Truth At Last by susand3022
Chapter 16 of the book Aurora and Alicia

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It seems I was behind... I hadn't read this chapter yet. I will have to read the others as I can over the next week! Still such a fun story! I'm enjoying the plot development very much.
Comment Written by Carla Trinklein on 05-Jan-2020

Life With A Glass Fitter by LisaMay

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Looks like you've hit upon another clever idea for romantic plays on words. Your imagination, paired with your command of English, is a double edged sword! Sorry I've missed so much. I haven't been on FS much the past couple of months, not sure if I will renew in March or not. Work I'd just taking too much of my time. I'll see how the next couple of months go, but I wanted you to know how much I've enjoyed your work and I wish you the best in the new year.
Comment Written by Carla Trinklein on 04-Jan-2020

Cloud-Watching by Y. M. Roger

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Only you can teach science with such artistry! A beautiful poem. I'm sorry I've misssd so much of your work in recent months. Just not sure if I'll decide I can renew FS in March when it comes up for renewal. Work continues to consume me this year. We'll see how things go in the next couple of months, but I want you to know how much I enjoy reading your work and I wish you the best in the new year.
Comment Written by Carla Trinklein on 04-Jan-2020

A Mysterious Object by susand3022
Chapter 1 of the book Aurora and Alicia

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So you are backtracking? I didn't miss the ending, did I? If so, let me know and I will find it on your portfolio. I have not been active on FS in the past few months...my teaching job is eating me alive this year. Not sure what I will do about renewal in March... but I do want to see this story through! I hope you are doing well in the new year.
Comment Written by Carla Trinklein on 04-Jan-2020

To My Secret Admirer Finale by Sally Law

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Such a nice touch to have them marry in Will's father's room, with him officiating! Also nice that it all happened five years ago, so that we could have a glimpse into their lives today. A completely satisfying story, very well told! Thank you!
Comment Written by Carla Trinklein on 04-Jan-2020

Love Letter on a Clipboard #5 by Sally Law

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Could not be any more lovely and romantic! Kristin is a very blessed girl. By the way, I see you were in he fifth ranked short story writer for last year! My congratulations, a well-deserved honor.
Comment Written by Carla Trinklein on 04-Jan-2020

To My Secret Admirer #4 by Sally Law

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I finally find myself with a few minutes to finish your stories. Not sure I will be able to stick with FS when I need to renew in March...my life just isn't conducive to writing and reviewing just now. I will miss reading happy stories such as yours, though! There aren't enough happy endings in the real world. ;)
Comment Written by Carla Trinklein on 04-Jan-2020

Love Letter on a Clipboard #4 by Sally Law

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So now we have a name, title and context for the mystery man! I'm glad he withheld his title, "doctor", for so long. Too many women would become blinded by that alone. And the fact that she already has an appreciation for his difficult father makes it more understandable how he would come to notice her. Still very much enjoying this story. I'm sorry I'm not very regular about writing or reviewing these days. My job as a kindergarten teacher has changed considerably this year. I've taken on a dual language Spanish/English classroom, and I am very preoccupation with doing it to the best of my ability. Between that and keeping up with my family, I'm just mentally very tired lately. Thanks for giving me an escape from the demands of my life with this wonderful story!
Comment Written by Carla Trinklein on 17-Nov-2019

To My Secret Admirer #3 by Sally Law

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Lovely...this young lady knows about unconditional love! Did I see you placed in a contest with an installment of this story? Congratulations! Apparently I am far from the only one enjoying it. Keep writing!
Comment Written by Carla Trinklein on 10-Nov-2019

Love Letter on a Clipboard #3 by Sally Law

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I love the quotes at the beginning and the end of this installment! I also loved your nonet. I'm glad the writer of the letter acknowledged that she'd have every reason to wonder if he was some "horrible creature". I love that he told her he would wear her tie "proudly"-being able to receive a gift graciously says a lot about a person. Very nice touch to have him paint a picture of her for her parents! That's thinking ahead! I'm as intrigued as ever.
Comment Written by Carla Trinklein on 22-Oct-2019


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