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Vance Seagle

In The Lord Some Day by elpsog

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I found this work to be very brief, yet very well done in communicating it's message, so therefore, I really do not have any suggestions to improve upon it! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
Comment Written by Vance Seagle on 06-Dec-2019

Hound Dog Face by EricDaGoose

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I found this work to be not only very amusing in presentation but very clever indeed, in every and all dimensions. I really have no recommendation to improve upon this work but certainly thank this author for a really creative and delightful work! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
Comment Written by Vance Seagle on 09-Nov-2019

As I walked in the valley... by royowen

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I would consider this work a strong effort of hard concentration and creativity from an author who has studied deeply into the bible indeed! I found this work to be captivating, deeply, rare and interesting and I thank this fine author for another excellent visit into the deep and wonderous world of GOD!
HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
Comment Written by Vance Seagle on 08-Nov-2019

Bionic Powers by Joan E.

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I found this work to be exceptionally rare and very interesting indeed, with no recommendations of any kind to improve upon this work, and I wish to thank this fine author for a very interesting read indeed! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
Comment Written by Vance Seagle on 18-Oct-2019

What storms... by royowen

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AS ALWAYS FROM THIS GIFTED AUTHOR, ANOTHER LOVELY WORK IS NOW GIFTED TO US AGAIN! I have no recommendations at all to offer as any form of improvement and thank this author for another delightful read! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
Comment Written by Vance Seagle on 18-Oct-2019

Call Me God by tfawcus
Chapter 88 of the book The French Letter

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I am a great fan of this author, Tony and having lived in Australia myself for many years, I'm immediately aware of his twists and turns, slips and slides, hangings' for life on stormy wave rides, whilst whippin' up a poem or two and still quite able to tie up his shoe! even without a drop of GLUE
Comment Written by Vance Seagle on 14-Oct-2019

The Whirlpool of sin by His Grayness

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WOW, I wrote a lot of words before getting caught in a bit of a slip! but let's face it ! what ever you do here on Fanstory is going to be a shot like they say when shooting CRAPS because unfortunately we are all (possibly except me) subject to human err, sneezing whilst upon keys, blinking when confused, late with the obligatory dues, thinking while unwound, and not likely to be found without a good hunting HOUND, AH but I do admit to sometimes being short of great wit, so I really must gamble to scratch up a bit by delivering some wacky new handle and light it up like the fourth of July candle! Then send it to Walker Man who will know how to keep me out of the can, so Tom cant find me and financially outwind me until I'm flying high on the sand! ... which btw! is damn hard to do!
Comment Written by Vance Seagle on 14-Oct-2019

The Majesty of Creation by His Grayness

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AWESOME FABULOUS WONDERFUL WITH GREAT THANKS to this author and hopes to see more very soon! This work is majestically presented in beautiful color and environment of lovely bright flowers! The dialog is rich and powerful and offers a grand appreciation of the lovely works on fine behalf of this fine author!
Comment Written by Vance Seagle on 13-Oct-2019

Those hills are old... by royowen

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I enjoyed this poem greatly and appreciate the wisdom behind it and the intention of this poet to bring deeper understanding to the gifts of the holy bible! With sincere thanks indeed! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
Comment Written by Vance Seagle on 07-Oct-2019

Another Time by Barb Hensongispsaca
Chapter 31 of the book 2019 part 2

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Excellent, well done, well received with sincere thanks to this author for a very fine and delightful read, greatly appreciated! HIS GRAYNESS: Vance
Comment Written by Vance Seagle on 28-Sep-2019


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