Love Bites Write a poem about love gone wrong or lost love. It can be sad, raw, or just plain angry (Just keep it clean). Express the emotions of the darker side of love. Any style or length. Be creative.
I enjoyed the theme and meter. Some good descriptive imagery. The only phrase that didn't seem to fit was "can't lose face"-- it seemed a little cliche and really didn't add to the character of the poem. I liked the image of "temptation's wasp" stinging.