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Law or grace? You decide. by royowen

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I enjoyed the theme and meter. Some good descriptive imagery. The only phrase that didn't seem to fit was "can't lose face"-- it seemed a little cliche and really didn't add to the character of the poem. I liked the image of "temptation's wasp" stinging.
Comment Written by bluemoontexan on 27-Mar-2019

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