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Shadow Paranoia by Gail Denham

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Nice image. I also like the photo you chose. I can see that poor frog frightened by the big shadow. Makes me stop and think, what shadows am I spooked by?
Comment Written by Miss Jane on 17-Jul-2019
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There is no Time by Dolly'sPoems

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Good point! We need to make our days the sweetest we can, and one good way is to bless everyone around us. Yes, time refuses to wait. Thank for this poetical reminder.
Comment Written by Miss Jane on 17-Jul-2019

Susie, Please Stop Talking by Janice Canerdy

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Haha! I know someone like this - in fact, I recently wrote a poem about it too. Not so short and to the point as this one. And I didn't think that maybe when her life is over, her talking will not be! Thanks for the laugh.
Comment Written by Miss Jane on 17-Jul-2019

Today, The Sky's The Limit by Gail Denham

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I love this! What an imagination! I especially liked the line "room for a pony." Cracked me up. And the little bit of oil on the gravel was a nice touch. Good job. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written by Miss Jane on 17-Jul-2019

Heart and Soul - Chapter 6 by Tootie
Chapter 6 of the book Love Long Distance

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A lovely romance! The emotions drew me in. One thing, though: Sometimes I wasn't sure who was speaking. Perhaps a bit of sensory clues would help? Like the hospital smell, the roar of the jet? The stoop on Grandpa's shoulders? Then we'd know who was speaking. I liked the poem! Well done!
Comment Written by Miss Jane on 30-Jun-2019

Good Morning Sunrise by Mystic Angel 7777

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Well done! Such a beautiful thought in only a few words. I like the idea of Dawn lifting night's inky curtain, and the day starting with Cat One. So true!
Comment Written by Miss Jane on 30-Jun-2019
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Mental Health Unit: Ward 6 by easyeverett

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I like this! It has good rhythm, and a great message. I especially like the lines: I'm not what you think you see - and: cause I've been here, right here, before. The rambling is so right on. I have a friend who suffers from this disorder so it rings true. Good job on an unusual subject!
Comment Written by Miss Jane on 30-Jun-2019

The Beauty of Respect by Diana L Crawford

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Interesting. Sweet. I like the photo too. The point of loving and respecting those in our lives is so important. Thanks for sharing this thoughtful poem.
Comment Written by Miss Jane on 28-Jun-2019
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Just one step away by JLR

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Oh. Sad, but true, especially since the writer had personal observance of this. Sad, yes, but that last line tells the redeeming truth. Glory awaits. What a hope.
Comment Written by Miss Jane on 28-Jun-2019

A View of Venus by Cindy Warren

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Thanks. I DID have fun reading this. I marvel at writers who can take something as simple as seeing a star and running with imagination to take us where most of us have pondered. Bravo! Job well done. Write some more!
Comment Written by Miss Jane on 28-Jun-2019
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