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Robert Zimmerman
The Wanderer by rspoet

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Hello Robert. You have an excellent rhyme scheme in this poem and I find it to be a relaxing poem to read. I like the narrative of the Moon being a wanderer across the sky.
It's an easy to read, rhythmic poem that appeals to my ear..
Good luck in the contest.

Robert
Comment Written by Robert Zimmerman on 16-Feb-2020
A Special Fanstorian by Pam (respa)

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Hello Pam. This is a very nice tribute to Sandra. I have gotten to know her the last couple of months and have read her stories. Your poem conforms to the style and reads easily.

You did a very nice job and I'm sure Sandra will be highly complimented.

Robert
Comment Written by Robert Zimmerman on 16-Feb-2020
Keep a Clear Conscience by Dolly'sPoems

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Hello Dolly. Your sonnet style is perfect and the message speaks of people relying o their conscience. Some folks are very good at getting their conscience agree with whatever they do.

Robert
Comment Written by Robert Zimmerman on 15-Feb-2020
Do you? by royowen

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Hello Roy. The questions posed in your poem are legitimate. These are queries we should pose to ourselves each day and night. The answers to the questions usually spring from character.

Robert
Comment Written by Robert Zimmerman on 15-Feb-2020
Nothing To Say by Ulla

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Hello Ulla. You did a superb job conforming to the standard of the 5-7-5. Most of all, you delivered a clear message with your words. Well done, and I wish you well in the contest.

Robert

Comment Written by Robert Zimmerman on 15-Feb-2020
Where Faith Rests by Sally Law

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Hi Sally. I appreciate your excellent message. Since we know there is no other way to the Father than through the Son. You know the way and that is a blessing. I wish you well in the contest.

Your Pal, Z
Comment Written by Robert Zimmerman on 15-Feb-2020
Maggot Mummy Is Happy by sandramitchell

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Hi Sandra. Hello Sandra. I'm glad you got that maggot mummy all cleaned up and snipped all the things hanging off him. That will make him a little more palatable.

Robert
Comment Written by Robert Zimmerman on 15-Feb-2020
Oh, Lord! by Susan Larson

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Hi Susan. This is an excellent piece. Your observations are keen and accurate. It is surprising to see how some people dress to go to church these days. nicely done.

Robert
Comment Written by Robert Zimmerman on 15-Feb-2020
Clinging by lyenochka

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Hello Helen. The picture tells an interesting story of how one leaf is hanging on despite all of the elements united against him. This is a good entry for the five line poem contest. I wish you good luck in the contest.

Robert
Comment Written by Robert Zimmerman on 15-Feb-2020
Manna From Heaven by Sandra du Plessis
Chapter 61 of the book Walk with God in Faith

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Hello Sandra. I have found the people that know nothing about the Bible and don't read it on a regular basis, know about the 23rd Psalm. They may not understand its true meaning but they are generally able to repeat part of it.

Robert
Comment Written by Robert Zimmerman on 15-Feb-2020
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