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My moody friend, the Ocean by Dolly'sPoems

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Hello Dolly.

Much of planet Earth is the ocean. It can change it's appearance in mere minutes. It is the thing that makes Earth different from the other planets.

The ocean is an amazing thing and it affects every single person on the face of the Earth.

Robert
Comment Written by Robert Zimmerman on 29-Sep-2020
Lost Socks by Jannypan (Jan)

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Hello Jan.

You're money is written to the style standard with a very interesting subject. I have learned from secret sources where individual socks go. NASA has a contract with the socks. When one gets lost, it goes to Cape Canaveral and is launched into outer space. Every time you see a rocket launch from there, the rocket is filled with one of a kind socks headed for parts unknown. ð???

Robert
Comment Written by Robert Zimmerman on 29-Sep-2020
Moonlight Ballet by Gloria ....

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Hey Gloria.

This is a really fine ekphrastic poem. The picture you chose is outstanding. The application of the words to the picture is primo.

Good luck with your excellent six-word poem in the contest.

Robert. ð???



Comment Written by Robert Zimmerman on 29-Sep-2020
Searching for Answers by robyn corum

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Hey Robyn.

Very nice. You twisted some language but you certainly didn't twist the message. There's always a debate about which is more important.

Is the message more important than the style? When there is a real message, it's always more important than the style. IMHO.

Robert. ð???ð???ð???
Comment Written by Robert Zimmerman on 29-Sep-2020
Nursing Home Escapees by robyn corum

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Hello Robyn.

This is a fun composition style. I like the rhyme and meter so well that I started singing before I got to the end.

This is a fun write. I like the content and you did a great job of matching the story to the picture.

Robert

Comment Written by Robert Zimmerman on 29-Sep-2020
Biden's Last Request

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Hey mystery writer.

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA.
This is a masterpiece. You have pinned the tail on the donkey. (did I say that?) Creative and astute.

Robert
Comment Written by Robert Zimmerman on 29-Sep-2020
Read and reviewed with blinders on.
Licked by a Puppy, Happy by equestrik

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Hello Equistrik.

Your poem describes life situation and a seemingly never-ending list of chores to be done but the celebration that you've given is the lick of a puppy.

It's truly amazing what something that tiny can do to a person's spirit. You go through the tough work in stressful situations, but at the very end, in the last sentence, the payoff arrives.

I have an 18-month-old puppy whose picture is on my profile page and I believe his tongue is as long as his tail. He is a licker. It can make a body happy.

Good luck in the contest.

Robert
Comment Written by Robert Zimmerman on 28-Sep-2020
Walk of My Father by equestrik

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Hello Equestrik.

This is a very well done poem with significant meaning. It is interesting that just walking down the hallway you watch your self walk in the mirror and it reminds you of your father. I like the term of "purposeful walk." That is a phrase that speaks volumes. It replaces sentences with two words.

Those are moments that often bring a smile to our faces. .

Robert
Comment Written by Robert Zimmerman on 28-Sep-2020
When Autumn Comes by judiverse

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Hello Judi.

You did a great job with your free verse poem about autumn, particularly given the fact that you had to do it in 15 minutes which means there were no edits and rewrites.

The descriptive language has made autumn feel like something that I wish to experience now.

Robert
Comment Written by Robert Zimmerman on 28-Sep-2020
A Calm Spirit by Teri7

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Hello Teri.

Europe: meets with the 5-7-5 style standard. The content is well written and expresses your personal feeling of that column spirit that He can give.

Robert
Comment Written by Robert Zimmerman on 28-Sep-2020
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