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Brenda Henderson

Toothless man... by royowen

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Very funny limerick. Although I'm told gums can hurt even when a person doesn't have any teeth. Lol. The artwork chosen is hilarious. Thank you for the chuckle and the smile. Well done!
Comment Written by Brenda Henderson on 19-Jan-2020

Essay on Lord of the Rings by Darlene Franklin

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This narrative will definitely encourage the reader to get to a library or a bookstore to acquaint themselves with the works noted herein. Any work that encourages others to read and invokes curiosity in the reader is providing a literary service. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written by Brenda Henderson on 19-Jan-2020

BRADLY‚??s injury script by MCLII1987

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Engaging narrative. It seems the language is more to give us a view of the salty nature of the character Zach. You did a excellent job drawing in the reader and investing them in the outcome of the skits. Good work.
Comment Written by Brenda Henderson on 19-Jan-2020

My conscience by Colin Lowley

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Well crafted. I'm certain that there are many who share your sentiments. I think sometimes it just seems so daunting and overwhelming. The 24 hour news cycle does keep the angst always before you if you continue to watch. Sometimes we have to give ourselves a break from the constant consistent noise. But we must never allow ourselves to become complacent or apathetic. Remember; " All that is necessary for the triumph of evil is for good men to do nothing." (According to a Google search this quote is attributed to Edmund Burke as he was quoted in a speech by our beloved past President John Fitzgerald Kennedy) Well done!
Comment Written by Brenda Henderson on 19-Jan-2020

My three Sisters by Colin Lowley

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Beautiful Colin. You can feel the love between you and your lovely sisters here. Thank you so much for sharing. It's a wonderful thing to have relatives that are also friends! Love the picture too! Well done!
Comment Written by Brenda Henderson on 19-Jan-2020

Outer Space Inner Space

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Striking piece. The artwork chosen here is exemplary and adds immensely to the presentation. The colors are vibrant and the words leap from the page. I only have one question. "Is that what Venus looks like at night through the lens of a telescope or is this just a really pretty picture?
Comment Written by Brenda Henderson on 18-Jan-2020
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Salvation's Price by Tina Crute

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Well crafted and beautifully presented. I love the acrostic style of this ABC poem which clearly and literally demonstrates that Jesus is the Alpha and the Omega and for those of us who have placed our trust in him; everything that we need in between! Thank you for sharing this piece. I'm sorry that I didn't have 6 stars to give. Well done!
Comment Written by Brenda Henderson on 18-Jan-2020

haiku (clusters of pink) by Val Crisson

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I liked your 5-7-5 poem. I only wish that the picture could have been larger and the breaks for the formatting could have made it easier to tell that it was a 5-75. I also liked the colors. They made it seem more vibrant. Good job!
Comment Written by Brenda Henderson on 18-Jan-2020

The wooden door by Colin Lowley
Chapter 1 of the book The wooden door

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Wow Colin! Engaging and compelling narrative. This has the makings of a lot here. I don't know if Harry Potter or Lord of the Rings had a similar start but this work could easily do quite well in that type genre. I can easily see this as both a live fantasy action or an animated or feature film or series! Well done indeed! So sorry I didn't have anymore six star ratings left.
Comment Written by Brenda Henderson on 18-Jan-2020

Martin Luther RIP by Colin Lowley

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Beautifully written. Very inspiring. This is a wonderfully informative and thought provoking tribute to a great leader and a kind and benevolent soul. Thank you for sharing this. Well done!
Comment Written by Brenda Henderson on 18-Jan-2020


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