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Jerome Goldberg

Horrible Haunted House by Jannypan (Jan)

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Jan - let me say this about that, it is a known fact that it is very hard to read a poem if your eyes are crossed. Yes, it was great fun. Good job. Best regards, Jerry
Comment Written by Jerome Goldberg on 16-Jul-2020

Heat by Jannypan (Jan)

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A fun poem relevant to our times. I am giving you extra credit for courage. Suggestion: next time use a driveway instead of the road. Stay cool - Jerry
Comment Written by Jerome Goldberg on 15-Jul-2020

Give Me Twenty by Rosemary Everson1

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Hi - this is a very well written story that is very relevant to our times. I have one problem with it, and I may be wrong, but I do not believe a patient can talk when they are on a ventilator. You might want to check that before the judging starts - Jerry
Comment Written by Jerome Goldberg on 15-Jul-2020

A Poet Writes A One Act Play! by Rhymer

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BRAVO! BRAVO! A truly novel exploration worthy of a student of The Bard. Yes there are possible flaws; but, I have heard your plea and " ...will be not overbearingly critical! ..." -Jerry
Comment Written by Jerome Goldberg on 12-Jul-2020

At the Proper Time by Spangle

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Janet - you picked a very emotion intensive topic and summarized it very well within the five - seven - five poem limitations. Good luck in the contest. Regards, Jerry
Comment Written by Jerome Goldberg on 12-Jul-2020

Leadfoot by Janice Canerdy

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Janice - interesting. I can see where the requirement to have every line start with the same letter can be quite challenging and you did it well. Jerry
Comment Written by Jerome Goldberg on 12-Jul-2020

My Love For You by Jannypan (Jan)

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Jan - this is a wonderful love poem that covers the many facets of love. I especially like the rhyming. Good luck in the Potlatch Poetry event. Regards - Jerry
Comment Written by Jerome Goldberg on 12-Jul-2020

Neowise by Jannypan (Jan)

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Jan - this poem is both educational as well as entertaining. It includes lessons on astronomy, poetry and photography. It had more content in two minutes then some of the ZOOM seminars that I have recently attended that lasted over an hour. - Jerry
Comment Written by Jerome Goldberg on 12-Jul-2020

Summertime Showcase by Y. M. Roger

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Yvette, Great descriptive poem. I can almost hear the magical concert. But it is to hot to sit outside and listen. LOL! Wish you well in the contest - Jerry
Comment Written by Jerome Goldberg on 12-Jul-2020

Our Anniversary by roof35

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This is a very well written story that held my interest right up to the embarrassing ending. I am sure that all parents have had similar experiences. Our worst one was while crossing a border; but, I'll save it for another time. - Jerry
Comment Written by Jerome Goldberg on 28-Jun-2020


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