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Frightful Curtains, triolet by Gail Denham

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A very strong repeated stanzaic verse propels your poem forward with good balance and creative delivery. Thanks for your contribution and I am certain you will do fine in the voting booth.
Comment Written by JLR on 24-Feb-2020

A Chance by victortouche

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Victor, a very fine presentation about pulling oneself up by the bootstraps and getting out a life's constant ruts. Thanks for your contribution to FanStory, Write on and write often! JLR
Comment Written by JLR on 24-Feb-2020

Hidden thoughts... by royowen

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Roy, In my practice as a Spiritual Director, I often see the layers of persona that we all cloak over the higher and true Self that we each possess. I find it so amazing that we, each of us, carry so many masks projected outward and in reality, it is very rare indeed that we see the true essence of another. Too sad!
Comment Written by JLR on 24-Feb-2020

Which World is Real by papa55mike

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Mike, outstanding in every aspect whether free verse or prose, it matters not. It is as though you and I journeyed in our human vessels with the slightest of one degree of separation. Therefore, I read a wonderfully authentic, honest and human expression of life. Thank you so much!
Comment Written by JLR on 23-Feb-2020

Morning Blues by Jeffrey L. Michaux

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A very short yet very completer analogy of life's constant bothers that dang alarm clock. If we only had a more simple manner in which to have our peaceful natures brought out from a deep slumber...
Comment Written by JLR on 23-Feb-2020
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Facing Acceptance by jaybird1

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JayBird, I really appreciate that you continue to celebrate and lament the departing of your soulmate. I hope the words you write and salve for your wounded soul. Thank you for being authentic and honest with your pen!
Comment Written by JLR on 23-Feb-2020

Neatly Pressed by Gloria ....

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Gloria, what an eloquent presentation that builds a powerful awareness of life's passages and the acceptance of death is yet just another passage. Wonderful contest entry and a personal pleasure to read.Thanks for sharing this.
Comment Written by JLR on 23-Feb-2020

Time is an illusion... by royowen

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Roy, a delightful and very philosophical pondering of time and relativity. As a fan of quantum physics and the universe, I too wonder, in how many universes did God create yet another Garden of Eden to provide mankind yet another chance to get ti right? Perhaps, that is what heaven is there for?
Comment Written by JLR on 23-Feb-2020

Will Spring Arrive Soon? by Gert sherwood

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Gert, you truly see the world outside your window. Your articulate free verse paints the honest reflection seen within your eyes and on your heart. An enjoyable read, thank you for sharing.
Comment Written by JLR on 23-Feb-2020

Delightful by Diana L Crawford

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Diana, thank you for your contribution in this week's challenge. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this poem and your masterful success in meeting the poetic style so perfectly.
Comment Written by JLR on 23-Feb-2020


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