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Archaeopteryx ~a Fossil Feather by Jannypan (Jan)

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Jan, wow! your sevenelle form that you have submitted for the Potlatch Club challenge reflects you have an excellent mastery of this poetic verse. Then punch that with the masterful author notes and I have been shown what a true artist work looks like, thank you.
Comment Written by JLR on 06-Oct-2020

Ladies in Training by June Sargent

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June,your wondeful, light and rythmic sevenelle form that you have submitted for the Potlatch Club challenge you an excellent mastery of Poetic verse. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written by JLR on 06-Oct-2020

Tools That Expose by dragonpoet

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Dragon Poet, your sevenelle form that you have submitted for the Potlatch Club challenge you an excellent mastery of Poetic verse. I am curerently taking a meter class on iambic tetrameter and realize I have so much to learn, thank you for sharing your talent.
Comment Written by JLR on 06-Oct-2020

Candace Amanirenas by lyenochka

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LYENOCHKA, As evident by this excellent sevenelle form that you have submitted for the Potlatch Club challenge you an excellent mastery of Poetic verse. A delight to read and thank you for your superior and informative author notes. A pure pleasue to read, thank you!
Comment Written by JLR on 06-Oct-2020

A Horseless Carriage - 1900 by Pantygynt
Chapter 42 of the book The Maid of the Mill

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This work has reached the exceptional level

Hi JB, After I read this chapter submission, I was compelled to go back and read the last ten chapters and must say kudo's for quite engaging story. I love your characterizations and the scenes which you have created, Your dialgue throughout is quite impressive and quite easy to follow.
It is obvious that you have had this story in your mind for quite sometime.
I will look forward to reading your chapter insertion, Jim
Comment Written by JLR on 02-Oct-2020

Yes, I'm an Optimist by Sharon Haiste

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Sharon right on! I love your taking a stand and I bet you, that your life has always had an upside to reach to. I think your one-line poem is perfectly timed for people who, I judge, are in a general malaize and see their cups nearly full, if not overflowing with stuff.....
Comment Written by JLR on 02-Oct-2020

Life's Muse by Sandra Leon-Gonzalez

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Sandra Leon, this is a very nice and honest poetic writing. You employ some solid end rhymes and create a smooth flow with your stanza breaks, the writing clearly reflects the Divinty you embrace as words flow from within.. Good success!
Comment Written by JLR on 02-Oct-2020

For the Taste of Honey by Mrs. KT

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Diane this is a wonderful poem, and all to real of an incident in those areas with native black bears. Your 5/7/5 us delivered with excellent execution. I do hope your do well in the contest and thanks for sharing.
Comment Written by JLR on 02-Oct-2020

Silly Cardinals by robyn corum

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Robyn, this is a fun write for the Picture this challenge. The selection of font and your playfulness with the word Cardinal as a punch to a well-crafted your end rhythms and word pictures sets this above the average. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written by JLR on 02-Oct-2020

I've seen it all now by oNray

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Thank you for posting your Senryu poem entry. It is executed well. Although in the strictest sense I think the ? would be best removed and the words centered and the font increased.
Comment Written by JLR on 02-Oct-2020
Read and reviewed with blinders on.


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