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Sometimes, I Wonder... by Y. M. Roger

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I found this poem quite charming in its simplicity. I love the way the opening lines flow and lead up to the end. The conclusion is perfect. I enjoyed reading this one.
Comment Written by Susan X Smith on 23-Feb-2020

I'm Not Alone by BeasPeas

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This is a humorous, light-hearted and upbeat poem which is supplemented by a striking image. I have to laugh when i think of how attached we all are to our cell phones.
Comment Written by Susan X Smith on 22-Feb-2020

Haiku(wintry waves billow) by zanya

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This poem is short and sweet and it is a respectable entry for the Haiku contest. The words convey a message that makes me think of climate change and the picture is a great addition.
Comment Written by Susan X Smith on 22-Feb-2020

The Last Time

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This is a sad but well-written story in keeping with the contest guidelines. I was originally expecting Charlie to be male, but of course many females also have that nickname. It sounds like she was poor which can only make it harder to survive.
Comment Written by Susan X Smith on 22-Feb-2020
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Eyes Down by Mary Ann McPhedran

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This is a cute and simple little poem. I like the picture you chose to complement it. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes for your ongoing creative writing endeavors.
Comment Written by Susan X Smith on 22-Feb-2020

Please Kill Me by Michael Devine

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You packed a lot into a very short format, but it is really quite gruesome, for those chicken hearted readers like myself. Anyway, thanks for sharing. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written by Susan X Smith on 22-Feb-2020

Snickersnees

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This is a humorous short poem which well meets the contest requirements as it adheres to both the meter and the topic outlined. I also had never heard of this word. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written by Susan X Smith on 22-Feb-2020
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

I'm Feeling Torpid

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This is a cute little poem which well meets the contest requirements in terms of syllable count and topic. Your word is a new one to me. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written by Susan X Smith on 22-Feb-2020
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Stormy Weather by Marjon van Bruggen

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I am not familiar with the ABC type of poem, but I did enjoy reading this one. It is upbeat and conveys the spirit of the conviviality of sailors very well. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written by Susan X Smith on 22-Feb-2020

Checkmate

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This is a clever poem with a picture that certainly fits the theme. It is a respectable contest entry, well meeting the requirements. Good luck in the voting. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written by Susan X Smith on 21-Feb-2020
Read and reviewed with blinders on.


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