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Of Distance and Resolve by Mrs. KT

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This is an excellent entry for the loop poetry contest, meeting all requirements. The words are well chosen and the message is one of hope and optimism.
Comment Written by Susan X Smith on 29-Mar-2020

Love Saves the Day by Mastery

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This is truly a bittersweet poem. It reminds me of war time or something similar, where love is the only consolation. The picture adds a nice touch. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written by Susan X Smith on 28-Mar-2020

'Til Break of Dawn by Barb Hensongispsaca

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This is a lovely romantic poem and an excellent contest entry. Your use of rhyme throughout the piece is well done. I would suggest changing "To" in the title to "The" or "Till." Also in the last line, I think it should read "tears of joy are...." rather than "tears of joy is...."
Comment Written by Susan X Smith on 28-Mar-2020

Horny Rich by Rmocruz

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This is a bit raunchy for my usual tastes. However, I have to admit it is funny, and traditionally, a limerick is meant to be a bit bawdy. Thanks for sharing this one.
Comment Written by Susan X Smith on 28-Mar-2020

Each day is unique by Sandra du Plessis
Chapter 277 of the book Little Good Morning Quotes

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This is an upbeat, positive, short little piece which describes an optimistic outlook on life. The lovely picture of flowers is a great colorful complement to the piece.
Comment Written by Susan X Smith on 28-Mar-2020

Ripples Upon The River by kahpot

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This was a good start at a story, limited by the fact that the writing prompt is flash fiction. I was a bit confused as to who the attacker was. The ending was a nice touch.
Comment Written by Susan X Smith on 28-Mar-2020
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Frogs In costumes by crzypnter

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This was an interesting story within a poem about what seems to be missed opportunities or unappreciated love. In a turnabout, the princes turned into frogs. The near rhymes work well here.
Comment Written by Susan X Smith on 27-Mar-2020

Last words. by Wendy Winter

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This is a rather tragic little post, in keeping with the Flash fiction limit. The last line says it all, and his words spoke volumes. Thanks for sharing. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written by Susan X Smith on 27-Mar-2020
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

ZM Not ZOOM by lyenochka

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This is a timely and relevant post to me. I had enjoyed using Zoom recently and had never heard of it before. My brother had mentioned their stock was soaring. If I do buy it, I'll take care not to make the mistake of confusing it with another. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written by Susan X Smith on 27-Mar-2020

Neighborhood Smile-Maker by Susanjohn

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This is a beary cute short story and an excellent contest entry along with the image. "Contagious smile" as a concept, is a nice play on words, considering the current pandemic.
Comment Written by Susan X Smith on 27-Mar-2020
Read and reviewed with blinders on.


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