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Susan Larson

Disappearing Act by Elizabeth Emerald

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We just went through this with my only surviving son's visit. I was displaying his two dead brother's mementos all over the house. Our guest bedroom was like a museum to the dead. It was so healing for the three of us to agree that life must go on. We can take pictures for our own therapy and nog burden guests with souvenirs of the past. This was very affirming to me snd where I am in getting rid of the clutter both in my house and in my mind.
Comment Written by Susan Larson on 21-Jan-2021

Grand Illusions Of The Fool by easyeverett

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This is really a deep dark poem describing the plight of the poor. "While children dine on caustic gruel and feel the force of highbrow scorn." Do these words just flow out of your brain or do you sit with a thesaurus?
Comment Written by Susan Larson on 20-Jan-2021

~ The One I Longed For ~ by Jannypan (Jan)

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Awesome! I wish I still had a six to give you. I hope there is a real object of your affection to whom these beautiful words apply. My favorite line;
velvet petals fell softly all around
permeating the air with their perfume.
Comment Written by Susan Larson on 20-Jan-2021
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Those Needed Friends by jaybird1

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This is all very sound advice and it never hurts to hear it again. In fact, I liked your poem so much I red it twice.
Recently on Facebook some former Girl Scout revived " make new friends, but keep the old, one is silver and the other gold."
Comment Written by Susan Larson on 20-Jan-2021

Gaia by Erika Seshadri

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What an interesting take on Gaia aka Mother Nature aka Mother Earth. It is so disgusting how her children abuse her. But she's apparently pretty tough.
Comment Written by Susan Larson on 20-Jan-2021

Sir Vivian and Emmy the Scary by Victoria...

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It's unbelievable how popular poop has become. From poop books to poop emojis, poop shaped cookies, poop themed birthday parties. There's even a recipe online for a litter box cake with molded cat turds. You really need to turn this into a book, complete with fake poop kids can use to decorate their rooms. While it's not my style of humor, I must say you have a winner here.
Comment Written by Susan Larson on 20-Jan-2021
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Cardinal by Taurus the Elder

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That bright fiery red bird against that stark cold background makes him look like he really dominates his territory all year long. They are obviously tough birds and you honor them so well with your mini ode.
Comment Written by Susan Larson on 20-Jan-2021

Love's Labour Lost by tfawcus

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This is the most imaginative poem I've read in a long time . So erotic and suggestive without really being sexually explicit. Tickling the imagination, even to the point of a tree making love to the moon made my heartstrings giggle.
Comment Written by Susan Larson on 20-Jan-2021

Pages of A Life by equestrik

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I love the clever way you have the reader turn the page for the next chapter in this young man's life. That could have been my mother and father you wrote about. There's too much of that out there. Thank you for bringing it to light.
Comment Written by Susan Larson on 20-Jan-2021

A Night Alone by MissMerri

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I think you did an excellent job of conveying the feeling of love without using all the common and obvious words the contest prohibits. Your waves of words really flowed for me.
Comment Written by Susan Larson on 20-Jan-2021
Read and reviewed with blinders on.


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