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Marilyn Lou Berry

Eye by lyenochka
Chapter 8 of the book Marvelous Human

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What a great chapter for your book. The illustration was right on and the part about it is with our brain that we really see was a strong punctuation mark in your couplets.
Comment Written by Marilyn Lou Berry on 09-Apr-2020

Mugs; Another Time another Place by Mabaker

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What a fast-paced, exciting read. I enjoyed the journey depicted in that piece of fun, intense paragraph-after-paragraph ride. Solid piece of writing.
Only one thing I noticed: 1st line after page 2 needs some punctuation after the "late": The efforts of the young driver came too late he couldn't get me breathing.
Comment Written by Marilyn Lou Berry on 09-Apr-2020

Human Voraciousness (!) by Alchera
Prologue of the book My acrostics

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What an interesting ride. Intense. I liked having to look up "Apollonian" for some education :) Your lines grab and hold and you have to wrench yourself free to boldly travel to the next line. NICE WORK
Comment Written by Marilyn Lou Berry on 09-Apr-2020

We Shall Overcome! by Jeffrey L. Michaux

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This poem, especially during these trying times, is a blessing of hope, faith, and will. It hits the spot being brief, positive, and encouraging. This is a really good entry.
Comment Written by Marilyn Lou Berry on 05-Apr-2020
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Speak without ego by Sandra du Plessis
Chapter 285 of the book Little Good Morning Quotes

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A sweet poem about feeling without planning for the results or expecting particular results. A cheery positive poem with a lovely photo to go with. Self-improvement can happen with certainty if this advice is followed.
Comment Written by Marilyn Lou Berry on 05-Apr-2020

Breezy Lazy Dusk by Gypsy Blue Rose

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A lovely, very visual Haiku. An equally lovely art choice. I can picture myself as the one written about and enjoying that type of breezy, lazy evening introducing spring with pretty plum blossoms.
Comment Written by Marilyn Lou Berry on 05-Apr-2020

Love in the times of Corona by Terrence Francis

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Ohhhhh, a surprise dreaded finale here. A lesson to be learned and observed for one's own health. Short and to the point. Interesting and reads quickly, intensely. VERY well-crafted.
Comment Written by Marilyn Lou Berry on 05-Apr-2020

Portrait from the Painter by Jeffrey L. Michaux

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A lovely statement in the form of a question. Photo is tantalizing. Makes one think, how to paint earth's photogenic offerings of art. Wonderful, thank you for this treat.
Comment Written by Marilyn Lou Berry on 05-Apr-2020
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Breakfast Face by Wils

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This is a great way to start the day, undeniably. Your photo accompaniment looks delicious. Your poetic metaphors are fun. Nice entry for the contest, a strong contender, in fact.
Comment Written by Marilyn Lou Berry on 05-Apr-2020
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Poppies by BigPoppaJrock

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Lovely tribute to beauty unfettered, untouched by current human constraints, that is nature as you described. Says big things in a small poem. Delightful.
Comment Written by Marilyn Lou Berry on 05-Apr-2020
Read and reviewed with blinders on.


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