Contact Us | En español    
         Join today or login

Marilyn Lou Berry

haiku(soft gray puffs emerge) by lyenochka

Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

This is so lovely, a very visual poem that didn't even need a photo accompaniment. I can almost see them growing and feel them, your words are vivid.
Comment Written by Marilyn Lou Berry on 28-Mar-2020

Hued Reality by Marjon van Bruggen

Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

What a wonderful art choice to accompany a poem that is pulls together the distant and the near for our visual pleasure. I like the assonance of "far stars" which is a swift, engaging beginning that brings us into your poetic world.
Comment Written by Marilyn Lou Berry on 21-Mar-2020
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

a beguiling smile by Mark D. R.

Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

What an delightful 7-word or less poem. Photo is also delightful. Such is the riddle of attraction. Your short poem cuts to the chase about the power of a smile!
Comment Written by Marilyn Lou Berry on 21-Mar-2020
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Social Acknowledgement by SmilingTurtle

Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

I like this "makes you think" type of poem. (line one "their" should be "they're"). It is a poem that elicits a physical reaction as provoked by the second interesting line. Then you place us in a circle that challenges. Nice!
Comment Written by Marilyn Lou Berry on 21-Mar-2020

Scared by Tanvi Pauddar

Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

You say so eloquently what many of us are experiencing right now. The first and final lines is a true summary of our times and lives right now. The photo is so beautiful: Looks like an elegant ring. Your words sting and capture the essence of these days.
Comment Written by Marilyn Lou Berry on 21-Mar-2020

Rebirth by Narsimha Chintaluri

Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

What a haunting and dystopian picture your poem paints, one that feels real. Your final line could be the final words at the end of an end-of-the-world movie. I like it a lot. The accompanying art work is a great choice!
Comment Written by Marilyn Lou Berry on 21-Mar-2020
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Ties that Bind by Shirley McLain

Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

I like the feeling of continuity that your poem creates. It's a sweet dedication to family and I am caught up now in a flood of memories of my own family. What a pretty family photo you included.
Comment Written by Marilyn Lou Berry on 21-Mar-2020

Inner Happiness and Peace by rama devi

Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

I'm in love with your poem's calm expression and encouraging hope in faith. It is a wonderful art choice you made; very good expression of the "antidote".
Comment Written by Marilyn Lou Berry on 18-Mar-2020

Legendary Fire by Gloria ....

Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Wow, what a compelling read and the accompanying photo is powerful. I like your 'what if' suggestion. It points us in a better direction and eases through the dark days.
Comment Written by Marilyn Lou Berry on 18-Mar-2020

A Pretty Girl. by rhonnie69

Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

What a delightful read. Cute, sweet, happy ending. We need some of this. Kids will like this engaging poem and the older children will understand and giggle.
Comment Written by Marilyn Lou Berry on 18-Mar-2020


Page: 1 Next Page



  Contact Us © 2014 FanStory.com, Inc. All Rights Reserved. Terms under which this service is provided to you. Privacy Statement