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Marilyn Lou Berry

Life Is A Wild Ride by Gypsy Blue Rose
Chapter 44 of the book Horror Haiku

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Fun and creepy and indicative of future non-living wild rides. I want my wild ride to keep on keeping on! This is a treasure, a unique Haiku of the horror genre and you crafted it well!
Comment Written by Marilyn Lou Berry on 17-Apr-2020

Easter Lily by A. J. Randall

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What a delight, a sweet tribute to the pretty, the seasonally "bold", fragrantly attractive flower. I like how at first you paint it a reserved lone flower and then for Easter it breaks free to sing its glory and be joyously fragrant.
Comment Written by Marilyn Lou Berry on 17-Apr-2020

Joe by Janice Canerdy

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Really fun read and nice surprise rhyming there, too. Good flow like a ditty. Amusing and, thus, a great entry for the contest! Thanks for the smiles!
Comment Written by Marilyn Lou Berry on 17-Apr-2020
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Appendix by lyenochka
Chapter 16 of the book Marvelous Human

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A really good explanation in poetic presentation. I recall in biology the possible functions of the appendix but shall we ever really know? This is a very very good entry that children will enjoy reading!
Comment Written by Marilyn Lou Berry on 16-Apr-2020

Two turtles named Tom and Tracy by Kelly Mcfadden

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This was a fun read, easy to follow, a tender meeting. Such a well-developed plot for such a short story! Hard to do. Good luck in the contest! It is a strong contender.
Comment Written by Marilyn Lou Berry on 16-Apr-2020

Forty Six Years by Chrissy710

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Such a tender and beautiful poem about a long-lasting love blessed and made in heaven as the saying goes. It is tender; a relationship that many people strive for, hope for. A wonderful loop entry!
Comment Written by Marilyn Lou Berry on 16-Apr-2020

Kindness by Kelly Mcfadden

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I enjoyed this uplifting piece that you so beautifully presented and it serves as a gentle nudging for good behaviors and as a hopeful piece for our coming out of it better with ourselves and with others.
Comment Written by Marilyn Lou Berry on 16-Apr-2020

Old Man Joe by Pam Norris

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I bet Old Joe would love his epitaph! It was funny and fun. I could picture an Old Joe behaving as he. This is an amusing entry and thus, a great contender!
Comment Written by Marilyn Lou Berry on 16-Apr-2020
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Dawn by Genibeth

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This is a lovely Haiku that paints a visual and tactile picture. Your lines are crazy good! They could be song lyrics! Wish I had 6 stars to award. Very nice work!
Comment Written by Marilyn Lou Berry on 16-Apr-2020

Harvest Moon by Gypsy Blue Rose

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What an incredible Haiku, so colorful and captivating. The photo accompaniment is amazing. You chose your words skillfully and effectively to present a lovely poem.
Comment Written by Marilyn Lou Berry on 16-Apr-2020


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