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Marilyn Lou Berry

Woman Putting on Makeup by Darlene Franklin
Chapter 10 of the book Celebrating Women

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This is a very well done poem and you chose your 3 words/line perfectly, words that matter and contribute to your meanings. Good art choice accompaniment. You followed the rules exactly which makes this delight even more special as it made for a difficult challenge which you met astoundingly well.
Comment Written by Marilyn Lou Berry on 22-Feb-2020

The Song of Purpose by Cindy Decker

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Oh, this is a sharp in content and loud in expression, seriously, I mean it..loud in expression as we really get hit hard with the silence that can happen when we are lost in life or in faith or in purpose. A VERY good painting choice that expresses your thought dramatically.
Comment Written by Marilyn Lou Berry on 20-Feb-2020

Life of a Tear by Darlene Franklin
Chapter 11 of the book Celebrating Women

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What a tender tribute to tears! Your poem is heart-felt and the last line leaves one wondering, realizing we don't get to know the truth of the pain of another who is shedding tears.
Comment Written by Marilyn Lou Berry on 20-Feb-2020
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Desire by Diana L Crawford

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What a delicious romance poetry with sensuality galore! It is a STRONG contender in the contest. So much romance and attraction in such a short poem. Well-crafted and a delight!
Comment Written by Marilyn Lou Berry on 20-Feb-2020

Ice Volcanoes by lyenochka

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Love your art choice photo. Your marvelous scimerick chills me and makes me realize just how many wonders there are in the world! And the dangers that go along with some of those wonders! Always a treat to read your scimericks!
Comment Written by Marilyn Lou Berry on 20-Feb-2020

Hellebore/Lenten Rose by lyenochka

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Wonderful personification with this lovely rose bending to pray (a great photo illustrating this), and gives us excited expectations for spring soon to arrive. Oh, toxic, how interesting your explanation. The deer have learned to leave along yay!! I'm taking time to go over my future entries realizing I need to work them more before submitting. Oh, did not know the flower used to be used to induce barfing.
Comment Written by Marilyn Lou Berry on 20-Feb-2020

Hellebore/Lenten Rose by lyenochka

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Wonderful personification with this lovely rose bending to pray (a great photo illustrating this), and gives us excited expectations for spring soon to arrive. Oh, toxic, how interesting your explanation. The deer have learned to leave along yay!! I'm taking time to go over my future entries realizing I need to work them more before submitting. Oh, did not know the flower used to be used to induce barfing.
Comment Written by Marilyn Lou Berry on 20-Feb-2020

Hellebore/Lenten Rose by lyenochka

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Wonderful personification with this lovely rose bending to pray (a great photo illustrating this), and gives us excited expectations for spring soon to arrive. Oh, toxic, how interesting your explanation. The deer have learned to leave along yay!! I'm taking time to go over my future entries realizing I need to work them more before submitting. Oh, did not know the flower used to be used to induce barfing.
Comment Written by Marilyn Lou Berry on 20-Feb-2020

Hellebore/Lenten Rose by lyenochka

Excellent
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Wonderful personification with this lovely rose bending to pray (a great photo illustrating this), and gives us excited expectations for spring soon to arrive. Oh, toxic, how interesting your explanation. The deer have learned to leave along yay!! I'm taking time to go over my future entries realizing I need to work them more before submitting. Oh, did not know the flower used to be used to induce barfing.
Comment Written by Marilyn Lou Berry on 20-Feb-2020

Hellebore/Lenten Rose by lyenochka

Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Wonderful personification with this lovely rose bending to pray (a great photo illustrating this), and gives us excited expectations for spring soon to arrive. Oh, toxic, how interesting your explanation. The deer have learned to leave along yay!! I'm taking time to go over my future entries realizing I need to work them more before submitting. Oh, did not know the flower used to be used to induce barfing.
Comment Written by Marilyn Lou Berry on 20-Feb-2020


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