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Melodie Michelle

The Garden by Patty Palmer

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I loved it!!! Thank you for capitalizing God and the words referring to God!!! I absolutely loved the photo you have with the poem!
Good luck on the contest!
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings;-)
Comment Written by Melodie Michelle on 14-Dec-2019
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What God Means To Me by essaywriter1

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I think it's a good Poem, however in my opinion, the words referring to God as in "your", "you", "he" need to be capitalized.

Otherwise, it is really good! Thank you for sharing! Blessings;-)
Comment Written by Melodie Michelle on 14-Dec-2019
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It's Time to Remember by Mr. Green

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I thoroughly enjoyed your poem and it was very heartfelt. I especially liked "and the wisdom to heal the scars of our past" ...
Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written by Melodie Michelle on 14-Dec-2019

Prevailing Fate by Kingsrookviii

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I like the poem but it is so hard to read the way you have it written.

"Seams,' likely empty envelopes, for our soul's to've greeting firstly, recall before
They're so inclined's secondly're split, sit upon whenever 'tis seasonal imparting ..."

This above is an example of how the language is difficult to read.

I like the idea of the poem though.
Comment Written by Melodie Michelle on 14-Dec-2019

Old Age Vows by Dolly'sPoems

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I love this part: "Now days are fewer, we have made a vow,
to only let the good things touch us now"

This poem is fabulous Ms. Dolly;-) I feel similar by getting older I'm not sure how I faced and lived through some of the things and situations that I did.

Now, as I get older, I'm more reflective, self aware and spontaneous than ever! It was like this was waiting to be attached to my perSOnaLity;-)

Excellent poem;-)

Comment Written by Melodie Michelle on 05-Dec-2019

A Christmas Carol. Page 2 by Dolly'sPoems

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I love this poem and I can't wait until I can read them all! Every word flowed together with no problem. It is like the poem just flowed out of you naturally and which I'm sure it did because of the way it reads!
Beautiful and EXCEPTIONAL!
Blessings ...
Comment Written by Melodie Michelle on 24-Nov-2019

Holly Covers a Multitude of Sins by duchessofdrumborg

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I love your many different references to Christmas and the descriptions are detailed. I love it!
You did bring out the true meaning of Christmas as well and it shined out from the rest!
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings ...
Comment Written by Melodie Michelle on 23-Nov-2019

Poetic Chimes by Dolly'sPoems

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That really is an excellent poem and I think it's really awesome that it's your own creation. The words flow very well together, almost musically, and they rest well together as well.
Thank you so much for sharing ...
God bless ...
Comment Written by Melodie Michelle on 23-Nov-2019

Rubber Tree Plant by Boogienights

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Truly a real enjoyable poem to read! If I were to change anything, it would be that I would give breaks in your sentences and paragraphs. It would make it easier to read but with that being said, your poem is extremely well written and the words flow well, except for the much needed breaks.
Example:

I promise you
if you please revive

I'll do my best
to keep you alive

sweet Rubber tree
who mom loved dear,

don't leave me now
just stay right here.

This, or something similar, would make it easier to read instead of it r all together like it is now. Excellent job! Thank you for sharing! Blessings ...
Comment Written by Melodie Michelle on 22-Nov-2019
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My Big Crush by Therese Caron

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What a sweet love poem to write for the special love poem contest! Grand kids are so easily fallen in love with aren't they? Well written and excellent flow of words. Thank you for sharing this with us!
Comment Written by Melodie Michelle on 22-Nov-2019
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