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Training Day by ImaginosBuzzardoDesdinova
Chapter 3 of the book Buzzardo in Texas

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Indeed in life you need to keep trying until the bull's eye is struck. I felt for Imaginos when Nora was about to leave him all alone. Thank God she had a rethink. I hope he won't let her down.
Comment Written by Thompson I on 21-Feb-2020

Fickle Nature by moongirlwriter

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Am a lover of sunshine. It makes me happy and eager to jump out, go out visiting and catch fun. I rarely complain of sunshine but intense heat and sunshine can be in conducive.
Comment Written by Thompson I on 21-Feb-2020

Measuring by bertodi

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A nice poem. I particularly love the first stanza, sixth and last. I wonder what the ruler was actually meant for and also the using of the hands' span for horses height.
Comment Written by Thompson I on 21-Feb-2020

Locking - Unlocking by Marjon van Bruggen

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Indeed death is the truth we need to take with equanimity of mind. No matter whether we keep the door locked or unlocked it doesn't keep away this unwelcome guest. It's indeed hard losing a dear and loved one.
Comment Written by Thompson I on 21-Feb-2020

Neatly Pressed by Gloria ....

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Wow! A nice piece. I love the third stanza the most, the choice of words are wonderful. The poem reminds me so much of how I view death as years and time go by. Well-done.
Comment Written by Thompson I on 21-Feb-2020

Life is Like Riding a Bike by Laura Moehrle

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A nice one. It reminds me of the effort it took me to be able to ride a two wheeler bike. So many had to take turns to teach me right from my elder brother to his friends. Thank God I finally learnt. I love the itemized lessons. It's a good one. I think there are some spelling errors to correct.
Comment Written by Thompson I on 17-Feb-2020

We Can Listen by Judd7

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I love the rhetorical questions in the poem, they are questions that call for a rethink. These days people are actually looking for someone who will give them listening ears and listen with empathy. I think there is an error in the spelling of the word, regularly.
Comment Written by Thompson I on 17-Feb-2020

Caught on the Bayou by June Sargent

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Honeymoon memories are indeed fond memories. They are memories that can be relived for as long as can be. They are memories that can rekindle a dying love. I think bougainvillea blossoms should be on a line.
Comment Written by Thompson I on 17-Feb-2020

Welcome Again to MyTwilight Zone by Ricky1024
Chapter 8 of the book The Book of Amazing Short Stories a

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Indeed a twilight zone. It's like watching a horror cannibal movie. I feel sorry for those innocent naïve visitors, they never knew they were entertained in preparation for a meal. I don't like watching cannibal movies it makes me feel disgusted. Nice one.
Comment Written by Thompson I on 16-Feb-2020

Black Hole by June Sargent

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Indeed when love dies it leaves behind a black hole that can only be taken away when the light of love is rekindled by both parties since it takes two to tangle. Well done.
Comment Written by Thompson I on 16-Feb-2020


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