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Aaqib Naeem

Amazing Creations-2 Frankenstein by Seshadri_Sreenivasan

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Interesting way to go about things... What terrified me will terrify others...but one must pull on every ounce and iota of one's imagination and creativity to keep on writing. And hey, if it helps break the writer's block then, even better!

This statement here... I need only describe the spectre which had haunted my midnight pillow."...makes it seem like the writing process must have been a piece of cake for her but I think we can all agree that it never is as simple as it seems to be.
Comment Written by Aaqib Naeem on 27-Jan-2021

Harsh Words by Mia Twysted

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Your words have a ring of truth to them. I have always thought that there must some consequences, unforeseen mostly, that await those who spew hate. Similarly, when the feeling of love is not reciprocated it hurts like hell. A good job writing this 5-7-5.

You chose a good image but the font color and background might need some work.
Comment Written by Aaqib Naeem on 27-Jan-2021

As People Weep by easyeverett

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Amazingly well-written and well-structured poem which makes so much sense when you sit back and ponder on it. These are all sound philosophical guidelines to practice and live by. I am actually in awe of your amazing talent for poetry and words. I even took the liberty to share this with a couple of my friends as soon as I read it. Best wishes to you and I hope you keep on writing strongly. Have a good day! :-)
Comment Written by Aaqib Naeem on 27-Jan-2021

Strength by Melodie Michelle

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This made for such lovely reading and I must say, your words have lifted my spirits with their truth. I always feel down and lost emotionally with no sense of purpose or direction. As if I am not even the hero in my own story. Having done and felt most of the things listed here, I was able to connect and relate with your work.

Thank you for sharing this. Have a good day!
Comment Written by Aaqib Naeem on 26-Jan-2021

Amazing Creations-1 by Seshadri_Sreenivasan

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Dreams are strange...period. They can be completely incoherent and non-sensical one night and then give you a reality check the next night. But I agree the basic premise of this piece that we must take our inspiration from stories all around us, even the vague ones we witness in our dreams. Because each of those stories will be unique unto themselves.

No wonder Stephen King is such an active and productive writer. He keeps churning out content all year when it takes other writers a couple of years at least to finish a good book.

Waiting for part 2 of this piece now...
Comment Written by Aaqib Naeem on 26-Jan-2021

Freedom's Crown by Susan Louise Gabriel

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Ah, the age old problem! Everyone wants and champions the freedom to speak one's mind but forgets to show the courtesy and compassion to listen. The same thing repeats all around the world in never ending circles. The way political disputes are emerging in the US right now...it feels like watching a third world country rip itself apart. Sad on all accounts.
Comment Written by Aaqib Naeem on 25-Jan-2021
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Time To Pause And Reflect by jaybird1

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This is a prayer said out loud. The voice of sanity in troubled times. Even as an outsider looking in, its apparent that America is a country divided down the middle at this moment. So much hate and mistrust exists on both sides. This is never a good sign for any sovereign state.

The people must remember that they are only fighting amongst themselves and making the foundations of the nation weaker as a result.
Comment Written by Aaqib Naeem on 25-Jan-2021

Funny Money! by Seshadri_Sreenivasan

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Loved it! I must admire the way you were able to cover nearly all angles and connotations in which money is used as a currency. In each of these exchanges, a different term is used and all of these terms are so common and yet, we barely ever stop it and think about it that...hey! If I am doing basically the same thing(a transaction between two people) then, why must I keep using different names for it?
So, thank you for making me stop and think about it!

Also, that fun finish at the end also rounded up the piece nicely.
Comment Written by Aaqib Naeem on 25-Jan-2021

God and Man by Alcreator Litt Dear

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Well said! This right here is what we all forget and overlook. The people know nothing about the sins or good deeds of a person. We all love to judge and we are all judged as a result and not a single one of us knows the matters of the heart. Only God knows the true intentions of everyone and so, only He can judge justly and rightly.

Thank you for sharing and best wishes for the contest !
Comment Written by Aaqib Naeem on 25-Jan-2021

Lights Out: Ranting Resumes by Elizabeth Emerald

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First of all, I loved your use of this term...Trumpeteers!
What a lovely way to describe die-hard supporters of that man and a nice pun in itself.

Chuck made a good decision by going into that self imposed quarantine, just in case for safety measures. That is how all citizens should deal with the virus.

Glad you have your friend back. No wonder he got triggered by the news like that. I think if you are active and vocal on political issues then you are way more likely to rant about them all of a sudden. Anyway, glad that person is out of office now. Best wishes :-)
Comment Written by Aaqib Naeem on 25-Jan-2021


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