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Elizabeth Emerald

Community Involvement by Judy Lawless
Chapter 23 of the book Journals of a Pisces

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Intense ending! You were wise to avoid involvement--certainly, you were both vulnerable given the circumstances. As to not saying no to in general--I have no problem--thus have avoided PTA meetings and such. Fine piece.
Comment Written by Elizabeth Emerald on 22-Sep-2022

The Poop Fairy by T B Botts

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Charming whimsy--and true to boot! Puts me in mind of the lawn signs with a squatting dog encircled by the red/slash symbol and the word NO! Great story!
Comment Written by Elizabeth Emerald on 22-Sep-2022

Show me the father by T B Botts

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Powerful and heartfelt with a sobering message, as well as a welcome uplift as to Coach Sherman. Sad how many men sire kids by multiple women, none of which they support.

Typo in title [father's==>fathers]
Comment Written by Elizabeth Emerald on 17-Sep-2022

Absence Is Announced-Part VIII by Katherine M. Kean
Chapter 8 of the book An Absence Is Announced

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Gripping drama--sounds dreadful--major surgery and experimental drugs. It must have creeped you out to have those things crawling out continually. Keep us posted.
Comment Written by Elizabeth Emerald on 17-Sep-2022

July 2, Young Biologists' Needs by Katherine M. Kean
Chapter 183 of the book Dear Diary, 2021

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Sorry for the delay--working backwards--stunning piece. Too bad they don't give non-members six-star privileges. This is a tour de force. I've read about the Thalidomide debacle--shameful!
Comment Written by Elizabeth Emerald on 15-Sep-2022

Sanitized Society by LateBloomer

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Brilliant and alliterative coinage--sanitized society. Heartfelt and touching reflections as to our avoidance of the ugly reality of the poor and damaged people in our midst. Fine work, Margaret!
Comment Written by Elizabeth Emerald on 15-Sep-2022

After the Storm Had Passed by BethShelby

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Wonderful story! You've managed to get much mileage from this momentous event without resorting to self-plagiarism--each piece provides an independent perspective. This is fabulous. Poor guy in the doghouse!
Comment Written by Elizabeth Emerald on 15-Sep-2022

Another shift by Judy Lawless
Chapter 21 of the book Journals of a Pisces

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What a kicker. An emotional affair -- with a new "best friend" -- is a worse betrayal than a one-night stand. Poignant reminiscences ending on a down note. As always, powerfully narrated.
Comment Written by Elizabeth Emerald on 15-Sep-2022

Happy Family by Katherine M. Kean

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Adorable--your family? (If so, names/ages/relationships?) Spot-on for the stumbling scenario. Well done in a 2-4-2. Nice, clean rhyme. Good luck. Cheers. LIZ How are you?
Comment Written by Elizabeth Emerald on 15-Sep-2022

Filling In The Blanks by Katherine M. Kean

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I am blown away--this man is a machine--masterful interview--you managed to cover the gamut. I'm interested in checking out his portfolio and read some of the reviews that got him in hot water! Well done.
Comment Written by Elizabeth Emerald on 14-Sep-2022


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