A Word at the Right Time
A relationship analogy.
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Angelina Alaimo

Remodeling by Barb Hensongispsaca
Chapter 18 of the book New Saved

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This is a beautiful poem and well written. It reminds me of the after life and what a wonderful place of peace and love intertwine. The picture depicts the essence of the beautiful state of mind when trouble disappears into thin air and all the trouble falls.
Comment Written by Angelina Alaimo on 01-Jul-2020

My kid by Kit draken

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For a one line poem it definitely displays a whole range of emotions. I would say it depicts sorrow and heartache. Good luck on the entry of this contest.
Comment Written by Angelina Alaimo on 01-Apr-2020

Capri by Diana Jaimes1

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Not a bad poem for a romance. I see the colours used the black and red for the displaying of emotions of this poem. I found the font hard to read though and maybe a change in colour would be better. Good luck on contest
Comment Written by Angelina Alaimo on 01-Apr-2020

In Jealousy's Captivity by Poetic Friend

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This is quite good for a 1 word poem. Well done on you elaborated how jealousy can captivate ones soul if we are not to careful in looking within and honouring our own strength and beauty.
Comment Written by Angelina Alaimo on 29-Mar-2020
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Each day is the same by jenintorre

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This is an excellent poem and depicts our times at the moment. Our loneliness and isolation we are all feeling at this present time. We no longer no what day it is, for time seems all the same in isolation. The picture you used speaks volumes.
Comment Written by Angelina Alaimo on 21-Mar-2020
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Blue Moon by BermyBye50

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This was well done for a 2-4-2 poem. I like the picture you used for this poem. It is so fitting the colour blue and how it ties in. The moon is mysterious and strange and that is all it is, no emotion. Well done.
Comment Written by Angelina Alaimo on 21-Mar-2020

A Life Fulfilled. by Rhymer

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Love the way it was written with such honesty and beauty. We could only imagine a unity of 65 years plus. This is a reminder to all on what is really important in marriage and what to seek. Thank you for sharing this beautiful union.
Comment Written by Angelina Alaimo on 21-Mar-2020

I Await the Knight by Elizabeth Emerald

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This is a rather reasonable good poem for 20 words.i had to read it a few times to get te true meeting of what your say. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written by Angelina Alaimo on 18-Mar-2020

Quarantined by George Anderson

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Love this and pretty funny in lighting up on this terrible situation we are all in. Quite fitting in this time to write about the cornavirus. Great poem and best of luck in the poetry contest.
Comment Written by Angelina Alaimo on 18-Mar-2020

15 Days by the13thpoet

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What a nice repetition poem and quite fitting at this tme. It definitely follows all the criteria's of a repetition poem. Best of luck in your entry.
Comment Written by Angelina Alaimo on 17-Mar-2020
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