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Anya Trofimova

AmaZing Animals - F by sandramitchell
Chapter 6 of the book AmaZing Animals

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This is great! I actually learned something new about frogs myself. I also love the image of the frog's tongue coiled like a spring. All the best, a.t.
Comment Written by Anya Trofimova on 10-May-2020

The Vows of Silence by Susan X Smith

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I am intrigued - sounds like something I would like to read. I am certainly intrigued by all the cliff-hangers in your book review. Best of luck in the contest with this entry!
Comment Written by Anya Trofimova on 28-Apr-2020
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Willow by January L'Angelle

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Wow, a very powerful piece! The futuristic setting that you present is vivid but an incredibly bleak vision. I hope that this is not where we are headed... Very well done!
Comment Written by Anya Trofimova on 25-Apr-2020
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Doctor Of Delusion by Mike Stevens

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Through so few lines and a witty satirical tone, you are able to convey a much deeper message. The medical myths circulating the internet are, indeed, a sad reality.
Comment Written by Anya Trofimova on 24-Apr-2020

The German Spy by Shirley McLain

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This is great! I really like the way that the voice of your narrator comes through your writing. You are able to build up a sense of tension/atmosphere and your conversations read realistically. A very minor point but I would possibly just consider varying your sentence starters a little, as quite a few currently start with 'I'. All the best and I look forward to more!
Comment Written by Anya Trofimova on 24-Apr-2020

Beeutiful Creature by Jennifer Cleveland

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Bees are indeed so vital to the human and natural world, and you capture this very well with your thorough descriptions of how bees perform various vital functions. A beautiful tribute to the humble bee! I would possibly just add a little punctuation for clarity. Best of luck in the contest!
Comment Written by Anya Trofimova on 24-Apr-2020
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Bills To Pay by Sandtana Kay

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Indeed, a sad but true reality for very many people! Beneath the apparently lighthearted tone at the start of the poem is a much deeper frustration and despair. Well done!
Comment Written by Anya Trofimova on 24-Apr-2020

The German Spy Part II by Shirley McLain

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This is a very strong piece of writing. Your characters are both engaging and believable and you choose the right pace, never artificially rushing the action. Very well done!
Comment Written by Anya Trofimova on 24-Apr-2020

Expectation vs Reality by Victoria Grace

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This is a very powerful message in this short story. It's power lies in what you choose to describe as it does in what remains unsaid. I really like the way that you choose the extended metaphor of baking a recipe. Very well done and good luck in the contest!
Comment Written by Anya Trofimova on 24-Apr-2020

Wait Righteous by elpsog

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What a moving and hauntingly beautiful write! I love the way that you weave in special moments such as the first kiss. A powerful message too! Well done.
Comment Written by Anya Trofimova on 23-Apr-2020


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