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Lorraine Jackson

Animal Tower by PoeticXscape

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Welcome to FanStory. You've come to the right place to read and share poetry. You're off to a good start. This poem has great imagery, is creative, and also humorous. Well done.
Comment Written by Lorraine Jackson on 26-Jan-2021

Poets Desires by JLR

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In just a few words, you have expressed every poet's dream...to write a piece that will have a lasting effect on readers. I am not a poet, but would like my fiction to entertain or educate, and be remembered. I wish you the very best in the contest.
Comment Written by Lorraine Jackson on 26-Jan-2021

My Visions of You by Charley Lake

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The creative wording in this poem is delightful, romantic, well thought out, and beautiful. The rhyming pattern is consistently smooth from the beginning to the ending. Now lets talk about that ending. What a surprise. It added a bit of humor to a romantic poem. Well done
Comment Written by Lorraine Jackson on 26-Jan-2021

Going Home by Begin Again

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This is a beautiful but emotional story and tribute to your mother. I could feel your anxiety as you listened to the ER doctor explain his findings. I fought back tears until you wrote, "her cancer has metastasized to her spine and her organs." The damn broke. I cried. I lost my mother, my best friend, to illness, when I was only 38 years-old. Even though this was sadder than I wanted to read, I continued because it is so very well written. I am sorry for your loss, and understand why you are just writing it now. It's a story of never ending love.
Comment Written by Lorraine Jackson on 26-Jan-2021

What?

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Your author's note is what made this poem humorous. "A flock of crows is called a murder." This 5-7-5 is totally creative. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written by Lorraine Jackson on 26-Jan-2021
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

The Lion by Eternal Muse

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I enjoyed this creative, poetic story. But what a sad story and ending for such a majestic beast. The picture makes you wonder how such an animal was captured. Tranquilized? Did he ultimately die of old age? I like the way you used your imagination to let the lion tell us of his past.
Comment Written by Lorraine Jackson on 26-Jan-2021

Lost Love by Quiet Guy

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This is a delightful romantic poem about a person who refuses to settle. The desire is to wait for the ideal person of their dreams. I especially like the lines, "We can look into each other's eyes, We can sit in silence and read." This piece is very creatively written. Well done.
Comment Written by Lorraine Jackson on 26-Jan-2021

Says Who? by Susan Louise Gabriel

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We are who God, our creator, says we are. I like that this poem starts with the first stanza and builds suspense. By the second stanza, it sounds harsh and mean. But by the third stanza, the sun begins to shine. This is well written with a clear and necessary message. Well done.
Comment Written by Lorraine Jackson on 26-Jan-2021

Kidknapped by GE Parson

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Is there really a joke on the aliens? You remember, but who is going to believe you. That may be the joke that's on you. (smile) This is an interesting story that makes you wonder what is going to happen. There are grammatical errors in the writing, but you can still tell what is happening. This is very creative.
Comment Written by Lorraine Jackson on 26-Jan-2021

Cram It by Susan Larson

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This was a fun and funny story to read. Sometimes I believe companies use Covid as an excuse to be lax. As a dialogue only story, it was clear who was speaking, and very easy to understand. Well done. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written by Lorraine Jackson on 26-Jan-2021


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