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Bobby Cunningham

Rooted in Dirt by JLR

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This is such a lovely little poem that you penned here. The picture accompanying this poem is perfect, nice presentation. The rhyming is really good and unforced which allows the poem to flow effortlessly. Have a wonderful day.
Comment Written by Bobby Cunningham on 19-Aug-2020

Broken Butterfly by richie b

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Wow!!! What an incredibly impactful and powerful poem that you penned here. The poem is both sad and beautiful at the same time. The photo is absolutely perfect. Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem.
Comment Written by Bobby Cunningham on 19-Aug-2020

Why the Ocean Roars by A. Louise Robertson

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Fantastic and a very strong entry for the contest. The picture accompanying this poem is absolutely beautiful. Your rhyming is impeccable, not at all forced. The poem and the presentation are both very elegant. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written by Bobby Cunningham on 18-Aug-2020
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Dun dun, dun dun, dun dun, dun- by pome lover

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The title is absolutely genius, very clever and creative to use the music to Jaws. The story is truly entertaining and captivating. This is a great entry and the end is priceless. Really great job. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written by Bobby Cunningham on 18-Aug-2020
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Trust Me You'll Enjoy The View by Earl Corp

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What a lovely story with the perfect picture accompanying it. The writing is very good and the ending about snakes made me laugh. There are some grammatical errors that need editing. First ,..."and I refused climb the rope in gym class." Should be I refused (to) climb... Second "What kind of paratrooper if you're scared of 60 feet?" Should be What kind of paratrooper (are you) if you're... Despite these two grammatical errors this is a very entertaining read that you penned here and still worthy of a 5 ? review. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written by Bobby Cunningham on 18-Aug-2020
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Fernando by Sally Law

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This is absolutely adorable. The picture is perfect the rhyming is creative the chosen colors are great and all of these things provides for a beautiful presentation. Hope you did well in the contest. Have a wonderful day.
Comment Written by Bobby Cunningham on 17-Aug-2020
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Fall Fashion by judiverse

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This is an exquisitely descriptive poem that combined with the picture accompanying it makes for a beautiful presentation. This is a very strong entry for the contest, best of luck. Have a wonderful day.
Comment Written by Bobby Cunningham on 17-Aug-2020
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When time itself... by royowen

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I love reading your poetry they're always so impactful and insightful. You do that consistently and on top of that your rhyming is always unforced and beautiful. Lastly your presentations are always beautiful and elegant and this is no exception. Have a blessed day.
Comment Written by Bobby Cunningham on 17-Aug-2020

Mere Clay Yet He Cares! by ESOSTINE

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This is a very clever and creative poem that you penned here. Two things I'd like to point out. In the very first line "Tho' the body in pains limps,..." doesn't read well technically you can have multiple pains that cause limps, but it flows much better with pains being singular. Secondly "Heaven cause I to humble,...". "I" should probably be "Me". Though it isn't perfect it's better than "I". Heaven causes me to be humbled. Than "Firm an' sturdy, not tumble." Make it "...not to tumble." This would preserve the syllable count. Despite these critiques this is still an excellent poem that you penned here. Have a blessed day.
Comment Written by Bobby Cunningham on 17-Aug-2020

Socialisation! by bertodi

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This is an absolutely entertaining read that held our attention throughout. Your impeccably descriptive words paint such a beautiful picture in the reader's mind. Wherever you're from, Hungary or Germany it sure does sound lovely. The writing itself is solid with no grammatical errors. Have a blessed day.
Comment Written by Bobby Cunningham on 17-Aug-2020


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