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Unrequited Love by Cindy Decker 2

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Nice poem that depicts a part of humanity that "forget their heart in their bedrooms", not letting others feel nicely just by sharing a smile or a caress with a pet. Your story brings to the light life, but from a pet's point of view, which enriches your readers. Picture expresses a nice pet receiving its "payment" for being priceless!! Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written by palmart on 20-Apr-2021

Stray Dog

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Positive poem dedicated to a character that modifies lives (just by showing interest and express feelings just by showing its happiness-meter (its wiping-moving tail). He adopts little cats and other animals just as part of its priceless nature!! Nice picture!
Comment Written by palmart on 20-Apr-2021
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

First Love by AnnaLinda

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Your poem links two different worlds with just simple, direct words that do not allow second alternatives, only one short and nice message. Your artwork enriches your message and encapsulates where it comes from: a Huge Heart! Thanks for sharing!!
Comment Written by palmart on 20-Apr-2021

Note to Self? by Alcreator Litt Dear

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Your poem takes readers to your World and expands imagination while continue reading. Nice travel, dear Author!! You unveiled your poetry in a simple, direct manner that cannot be considered far away for real writers. And, in some parts, you teach from your experience which is important to thank for having new writers enriching from your own experience. And your notes also explodes the effect of your poem!

Recognitions are just starting, for sure!! Wish you a great future!
Comment Written by palmart on 20-Apr-2021

Mental Health Unit: Ward 6 by easyeverett

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After reading your poem and notes, I really consider you a brave person that faces your past from the top of the hill, and not from the valley. I did not realise the reading of your writing, but the notes has a clarifying power that is astonishing! I found your writing as very "teaching" one, as you describe "while inside" has an additional specific weight in your notes. Thanks for sharing!! Blessings!
Comment Written by palmart on 17-Apr-2021

A Life-Long Quest by easyeverett

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Nice poem, full of descriptions of different aspects of life, but in all of them stating that the driver is yourself. You are the results of your past decisions and that is clearly stated in your writing. My perception is that you decided to face this approach as abstract, so it is very hard to find a picture or an artwork that can illustrate it.
Comment Written by palmart on 15-Apr-2021

Swan Flight by ~Dovey
Chapter 14 of the book Reflections on an Alaskan's April

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Nice Acrostic and, let me say, a bit hidden. I discover it reading the footnotes, but all makes sense by reading in this way. The word "trumpeters" located in a different position is disruptive and brings a new meaning to that word. Great picture and nice strategy to write! Thanks for sharing!!
Comment Written by palmart on 14-Apr-2021

A Useful Tool by Suzanna Ray

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Your poem addresses poetry energy to the main Writers' book: our loved dictionary! It may be thick or small, electronic or paperback, thesaurus or for meanings. But, in any case, this tool helps writers to face (and win) the Words' battle. Nice picture and perfect use of words. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written by palmart on 14-Apr-2021

Rescue by Marla J Ritenour

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Wow! What a subject and what a poem!!!
You have made a great physical, mental and emotional effort to face writing something so intimate and so personal, that it is hard because of the deep memory that this type of situation leaves in our lives. But you are a very good "storm pilot" who has traversed difficult skies but now enjoys being at the finish line with head held high and arms ready for action. I once heard the expression that "there is still thread on the spool" (there is still life to go on). Thank you for letting us see your inner wealth, now even richer after this life experience.
Comment Written by palmart on 14-Apr-2021

Peanut Butter Cup by Chris Fruge
Chapter 14 of the book April 2021 - Poem a Day Challenge

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This poem whets the appetite !! Very good writing and perfect description of the "perfect marriage" (those that are not common to find in our societies today). But beyond this detail, the marriage that you describe is too perfect and continues to teach us that putting the best of every part, the relationships last a long time, like peanuts and chocolate!
Comment Written by palmart on 14-Apr-2021


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