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The Leap of Faith by JLR

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A message full of hope and not of negative words! It is hard not to blame twenty-twenty of all our restrictions, but you did marvellously, with positive words to describe so many lacks in the year, all named in your poem. There is a proverb that says "The last thing we loose is hope" as there is nothing behind it...
Comment Written by palmart on 30-Dec-2020

Depressed by Tonsy Bennett

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When someone feels depressed with a cause, it is human to feel down. But when this situation covers all our life and "all of our life book, turn into this chapter only" we are in a depression. I found that you verbalize here the depression very well, which can be found a good comparison with many people facing today similar situations as per Covid 19.

Nice artwork, with some cubism and colours that shows by the opposite your clear message. Great choice and work!
Comment Written by palmart on 27-Dec-2020

Lessons of the Heart by sammielwf

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Great Nonet!! You put your poetry on teaching, what is one of the most astonishing roles in society and persons` lives!! You valuated the role of the student as well, which is key to develop free and brilliant people, which results in free and brilliant countries. "Never stop Trying" is one of my mottos. I teach with curiosity, one of the devalued values we face. I always say " Internet has all the answers, but , do you have any question? Without that, all answers are useless". Have a Great and Blessed 2021!
Comment Written by palmart on 27-Dec-2020
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Christmas is in the air by Eternal Muse

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Very Powerful poem!! It is perfect for the Christmas and you put an eye in every detail that identifies this Season! Rhyming is just perfect and use of wording needs zero corrections, only great comments. Artwork is a very nice one and recognitions have just started. Merry Christmas!
Comment Written by palmart on 20-Dec-2020

The Dark Rose by tfawcus

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There's a time for every little thing in our lives. As you nicely described in your poem, time is ephemeral and moves fast. If we stop and do not act, the magic second is gone and what we imagined that could be something like a huge love, it is gone and the only remain are ashes of that supposed fire. Your rhyming is nice to read and the picture was a great choice. Thanks for sharing your poetry!
Comment Written by palmart on 18-Dec-2020

Snow Dance by DonandVicki

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We humans find difficult to accept that "opposite ends meet", but your poem put that into a clear evidence. The cold weather felt in our bodies, bring an opposite sensation that with a loved person sparks the warm feeling described in your poem. Exquisite description of perceptions. Picture chosen brings a visual impact of cold described!
Comment Written by palmart on 17-Dec-2020
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Acrostic Acrobatics 2020 by Y. M. Roger

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Great combination of many ingredients: Great descriptions, colorful writing and nice-to-view artwork! What else is required? Your nice wishes for us all to have a "Very Merry Christmas" is definitively "the cherry at the top of the delicious dessert". Thanks for sharing your poetry!
Comment Written by palmart on 16-Dec-2020

Maradona by Alcreator Litt Dear

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Great Acrostic with full details of Maradona´s life! I heard that he had a gift, according to sports commentators: when he carried the ball and had to face an opposing player, he knew which leg the opponent was leaning on and passed it on that side. The opponent when changing the weight of his body, Maradona had already spent him, holding the ball. Something incredible!
Comment Written by palmart on 16-Dec-2020

The Miracle by Taurus the Elder

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Nice writing that leads we readers to a nice place where peace is born by the presence of a powerful God and king that has chosen a little humble location that has the most important ingredient for happiness: LOVE.
You selected an incredible artwork that has the perfect light, images and angels that surrounds the "Holy Family". Great job!
Comment Written by palmart on 15-Dec-2020

EOY Messages 4 FanStory Friends by robyn corum

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Thank you for your nice salutation for the year that is going out, Robyn!!
I feel part of this nice and human society of writers that encourage each other to face new challenges and ways to address them! Free hugs! That is probably one of the things that the World needs most, but unfortunately, pandemic is taking us apart! Let´s share your great poem and receive more hugs and recognition!
Comment Written by palmart on 15-Dec-2020


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