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To Tell the Truth by Rosemary Everson1

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My heart and soul stands
with my family
oversees our great homeland.


Im a immigrant In the USA, me and my immediate family moved here years ago. I miss my other family members and my homeland. I can't wait to see them again.
This is really beautiful, keep up the good work.
Comment Written by Nowae20 on 31-Jan-2021

Chances by CA Keller

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"I feel your steadfastness
In my spirit.
The presence of your security
Holding me strong and safe.
For I am fearful by nature,
Unsure of so much.
Seeming to have many loose ends" I love this. Keep up the good work
Comment Written by Nowae20 on 31-Jan-2021

Spring's Progression by Janice Canerdy

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"Comes June's debut with longer days
and rising heat. To summer's ways
we soon must bid sweet spring adieu.
With longer days, comes June's debut" I love this poem, I love the world play and everything about this poem.
Comment Written by Nowae20 on 31-Jan-2021
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Boon cartoons by bournemouth

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"You enjoy yourself very much
Seeing cartoons such
As the wolf and the ginger
Of Tex Avery, you laughed a lot,
When you heard Woody woodpecker" I love it, I really did enjoy watching cartoons as a child
Comment Written by Nowae20 on 31-Jan-2021
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When I Was Young by Boogienights

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"Perhaps a famous author's who I'd be,
I'd write detective novels, poetry.
The publisher's will rave how my books sell,
my family would be very proud of me." This line speaks to me because I really want to be a writer. I might not be as famous, however I am willing to try to reach my dreams.
Comment Written by Nowae20 on 31-Jan-2021
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My Sweet Nicholas by Ima L. Ami

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I really admire haiku style poets. Tge ability to tell a whole story in just a few words is quite amazing. I'm learning how to write in haiku style myself. This was beautiful. Keep up the good work
Comment Written by Nowae20 on 31-Jan-2021

The flow by Wendy G

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"Sand flows through fingers ...
Words flow through minds, thoughtfully ...
Poems gently form"
I long wawanted to try this poem style of writing, this a such a nice example. Keep up the good work
Comment Written by Nowae20 on 31-Jan-2021

A Challenge by Kawashima

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"I have yet to read
another haiku as good
as the one I wrote"

You are right ???
Keep up the good work. I'm going to check out your other works.
Comment Written by Nowae20 on 31-Jan-2021

Disney Toons by Raul1

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I also enjoyed watching cartoon as a kid. My favorite character was Sofia the first. I had such a nice childhood thank to friends in cartoons. I love this. Keep up the good work
Comment Written by Nowae20 on 31-Jan-2021
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Cherry Blossom Petals by Gypsy Blue Rose

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"haiku is a short poem that uses imagistic language to convey the essence of an experience of nature intuitively linked to the human condition" I enjoyed your poem, keep up the good work
Comment Written by Nowae20 on 31-Jan-2021


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