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Maradona by Alcreator Litt Dear

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I am a big sports fan. Although I don't follow football in America the way it is followed in other parts of the world, I can honor anyone who plays any sport at the highest level.
I see from your poem that Maradona passed away recently. This is a fine tribute to him.
Good job.
Comment Written by Cynthia Adams1 on 18-Dec-2020

A Christmas Miracle by Dolly'sPoems

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Very fun take on Ebenezer. The artwork is a nice accompaniment too.
I think your poem fits nicely into this poetic format.
There are nice images throughout.
I think the first two lines and the last two lines are the strongest, for me.
Which is perfect in a poem.
Very nice work.
Comment Written by Cynthia Adams1 on 17-Dec-2020

Humanity in Harmony by rama devi

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Yours is a well-done poem that embraces a plea we so much need in these days. After four years of "America First" and even within that, white first, wealthy first, Christians first,
I think we are in desperate need of a kinder, more altruistic worldview. There is at least a bit of hope for the future since the election.
There are many nice images of your poem.
I love the last couplet.
Comment Written by Cynthia Adams1 on 17-Dec-2020

Winter Storm by zanya

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I very much like romantic stories.
I think period pieces are more difficult than contemporary to write because we have to breath life into a century long gone, whose customs and beliefs were different than today.
I think you did a good job with that.
Of course as a reader, I wanted the two main characters to reunite.
My only question is: What has changed? If the father disapproved previously, what would have changed that?
It is good that she finds out he didn't drop her because he wanted to.
But I think you need an explanation of why the girls father would suddenly accept this older suitor now.
Comment Written by Cynthia Adams1 on 17-Dec-2020

A dressed up proposal by Susan X Smith

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An interesting play on words,accompanied by a perfect photo to enhance it.
The title also contributes to the humor.
Nice job and good luck in the contest.
Blessings of the season to you and yours.
Comment Written by Cynthia Adams1 on 17-Dec-2020

The Miracle by Taurus the Elder

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This is a very nice tribute, especially for the Christmas season, but also for the entire year.
There are nice images in your words.
The picture is an excellent accompaniment.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written by Cynthia Adams1 on 16-Dec-2020

The B-Word by humpwhistle

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Yours is a fun story to read.
Any of us with siblings, male or female, have countless complaints. I think we are supposed to.
My siblings weren't nearly so ornery and I hope your story isn't totally true because she sounds like a beaut.
I love your writing in all of your work. This is no exception.
Very nice job.
Comment Written by Cynthia Adams1 on 16-Dec-2020

Don't Judge Me! by Seshadri_Sreenivasan

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What a wonderful sweet story.
The picture is totally precious...I don't know if it is yours or from the art cache.
I love animals and have always thought donkeys got the short end of the stick.
You do a wonderful job making readers appreciate them.
I didn't know their memories are so good.
Thank you for your interesting, thoughtful piece.
Comment Written by Cynthia Adams1 on 16-Dec-2020
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Who is Santa Claws? by LisaMay

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I so love your poem...very cute.
I'm wondering how you came up with this artwork.
I particularly enjoy humorous entries these days...we've all been through a lot this year.
It is a clever spin on the Covid virus.
Nice job.
Comment Written by Cynthia Adams1 on 16-Dec-2020

Dancing Snowmen by Lisa Wharton

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What a cute poem...it made me smile.
I like the concept of snow sheilding the Earth.
Howling is a wonderful sound image. It is a very strong word.
Snowmen dancing is a great sight image.
The artwork is perfect.
Strong entry in the contest.
Comment Written by Cynthia Adams1 on 16-Dec-2020
Read and reviewed with blinders on.


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