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Little Miss Dandelion by Dolly'sPoems

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A perfect representation of Little Miss Dandelion. She has more gifts than many people aren't aware of. The fact that she is the first to show her head in snow before spring, speaks volumes. It's a well written poem and delivers a good message. :) x
Comment Written by Light Magic on 08-Aug-2021

Before the Bing by rspoet

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Brilliant! Fully explained! I would read this to children and adults alike. Your poem is imaginative, entertaining and somewhat informative. :) I love it! Well written and a pleasure to read.
Comment Written by Light Magic on 08-Aug-2021

To My Fanstory Friends by Gert sherwood

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What a heart warming poem Gert. I love the way you've written this and the message within it. Your poem flows, is easy to read and you've chosen your senses to reflect your muse. It's lovely. :)
Comment Written by Light Magic on 08-Aug-2021
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To Write, Or Not? by Bonnie Seach

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I thoroughly enjoyed reading this Bonnie. I shall refer to it when I have writers block. Well written with a good play on words. I definitely think you possess the art of penmanship... :)
Comment Written by Light Magic on 08-Aug-2021
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Fated by Bill Schott

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A great choice of artwork to compliment your well written poem. Your words and colors offer mystic and contemplation. This could be the song of a siren.
Comment Written by Light Magic on 08-Aug-2021

Broken Beauty by easyeverett

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What a picture you paint! What a great poem! I can see the ghost of this little, town; deserted, tumbleweeds, cattle trains, the occasional, inexplicable, glitter of light and a slight echo of frivolous laughter on the breeze. A most enjoyable read.
Comment Written by Light Magic on 08-Aug-2021

Outside The Room by easyeverett

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The depth of this poem feels as though one has truly experienced 'the dark night of the soul' in all of its profundity. It's thought provoking, confronting and well written.
Comment Written by Light Magic on 08-Aug-2021

Blankets of Summer by Katie Mae Dead

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A perfect depiction of the title, both with the illustration and your beautiful poem, which leaves me feeling refreshed and elated. I can almost smell the flowers. I love it!
Comment Written by Light Magic on 08-Aug-2021

Inception by Bill Schott

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A birth and a death. Elation and melancholy. Philosophical. Best of luck in the contest Bill, your poem is perfectly expressed. The photo is also a good choice.
Comment Written by Light Magic on 24-Jul-2021

Green, Blue, and Yellow by Bill Schott

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I'm lost for words. All I can say is your grandkids must love you. :)) This is fun to read - and I'm being truthful because I don't want to be duppaned.
Comment Written by Light Magic on 19-Jul-2021


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