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After traveling life's treacherous road for many a year, I too have found my way back to a passion I sorely missed. My husband wanted me to write again and your beautiful and inspiring poem touched the perfect spot. Thank you for sharing.
Very well done. I loved the descriptions of nature in Tasmania and the sensation of savoring the chocolates. One does not chew chocolate, but you knew that. It melts in the mouth and it's complex flavors excite every aspect of the brain as it oozes down the throat. Thank you. --Stan
Hello welcome back
sometime Gods says you need a break
and due time your mind, body, soul and muse will get your motors going again.
Thank you for sharing this uplifting write.
Gorgeous photo of grandma and baby. Yes, you will write again, it is in our blood. A watched pot never boils, and when we walk away for a while, the dinner gets cooked. Nice to see you pop in with a little poem. I was wondering? XXK
-Very good artwork.
-Glad to see you, Marijke.
-Nice poem about how that
muse will return, and I know
you will be sharing more.
-You are a good writer.
Hi Marijke, well you may be waiting for your muse but I think he has already arrived. A very nice poem in 8,6,8,6 syllable form maintained throughout, apart from line- 'Be it essay be it verse' which has seven syllables' - just a small detail in an otherwise lovely poem. Warm regards Dorothy x and keep writing.
This sounds like a bad case of writer's block. It seems a must has hit and hopefully will stay for a long time. I like the repetition. It helps show how much writing means
to the speaker in the poem.
I like how the motion in the artwork shows how motion changes an object.
Hooray .. there you are in great form my friend. what a delightfully encouraging poem you've created.. I'm so glad you let the pen take you by the heart and scribe this awesome little verse Marijke. Bet it felt good to create once more.. Keep the inspiration going .. ( when time permits).. You are a fabulous writer... sending bundles of happy smiles and hugs your way, luv mel xox
amazing artwork.. really grabs the eye ... cheers again.
It is good to have you back with us. I had been wondering. When the muse hijacks our pen, it should be a crime... but if we lock them up, then where would we be? lol Your ab, cb rhyme scheme was delightful. I'll be looking forward to more soon!
Welcome back! I was happy to see your name in my inbox. Muses sometimes take long sabbaticals but they always come back eventually. I enjoyed this clever writer's block poem
Good flow, fine rhyming. Good use of rhythmic repetition. Fine phonetics too!
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One day(,) I'll grab my pen
nice medley of F and W sounds here:
The words will flow - effortlessly
Be it essay(,) be it verse
Perfect closing note:
But I am sure I'll write again
... for better or for worse
Implying you are 'married' to your muse, so to speak.