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Tug-A-War

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This is a very well written poem about a subject I know too well! You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery with the art work. The only thing I can say my friend is to just keep fighting and holding on. In the end we win because of Jesus Christ! Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 12-Jan-2018 by Teri7
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Let your heart guide you and when it flutters and misses a beat you will know that love has entered, loving takes up far less effort than hating in my experience and love also opens many doors in life, good luck, your write is honest and open, love Dolly x
Comment Written 11-Jan-2018 by Dolly'sPoems
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While I disagree with the theology expressed, I think the writing pretty good. Liked the verse ...deep down... very well said. This is a declaration of faith and as such it works ok. Anyway, good work and I did find it interesting and worth the read.

Comment Written 11-Jan-2018 by Halfree
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A very well-written poem about the carefree days of our childhood when nothing could upset or worry us. We do things whatever way we wanted.

Happy New Year to you and your family.
Comment Written 01-Jan-2018 by Sandra du Plessis
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I love the photo you choose for your poem
it is a perfect match
So many times I think how life was simple and pleasant compare to life as a child today.
Lord please let this madness go away.
Cookie
Comment Written 31-Dec-2017 by misscookie
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2018
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    You're very welcome, peace God be with you.
    Cookie


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Nicely said. It would truly be nice to be a kid again. Although I don't know about living life all over.
Well written, a pleasure to read.
Happy New Year to you.
Sharon
Comment Written 31-Dec-2017 by Sharon Haiste
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This speaks how innocent mode of living we have in our all childhood days when we went for fun, amusement, play, laughter and smile; life was full of freedom and movement; I liked. DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 31-Dec-2017 by Alcreator Litt Dear
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I love your words here . . . so real and true, we were so innocent when children and slept without worries and oh to be a child again, sentimental words, lovely, love Dolly x
Comment Written 31-Dec-2017 by Dolly'sPoems
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Very realistic, I am impressed these are the things we try to teach our children and all the things they have that we didn't have yet or how we can around and enjoyed our ffamily ad friends inside as tv and internet was basic back then. the speed the games. they have no clue. awesome.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2017 by John A Catania
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Remembrance of an innocent of a child of course we've all been there and tell them that is a wonderful thing according to religion of child is not responsible for its actions until the age of eight years old way back in the sixties we had no curfews we came home by dark time to have dinner and do our homework afterwards the doors were never locked crimes back then work rare they did happen but they weren't as bad as today very little drug use alcoholism was of course some prevalent thanks for this well written piece talk to Ricky 1024
Comment Written 30-Dec-2017 by Ricky1024
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2017
    I was happy to write it. Thank you for the great comments.


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