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After traveling life's treacherous road for many a year, I too have found my way back to a passion I sorely missed. My husband wanted me to write again and your beautiful and inspiring poem touched the perfect spot. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2019 by Begin Again
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2019
    Thank you. I am pleased I was helpful? unfortunately, so far, I have not written anymore. But... I will write again. Kind regards, Marijke :)


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Very well done. I loved the descriptions of nature in Tasmania and the sensation of savoring the chocolates. One does not chew chocolate, but you knew that. It melts in the mouth and it's complex flavors excite every aspect of the brain as it oozes down the throat. Thank you. --Stan
Comment Written 10-Mar-2018 by udallsc


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Hello welcome back
sometime Gods says you need a break
and due time your mind, body, soul and muse will get your motors going again.
Thank you for sharing this uplifting write.
Cookie
Comment Written 23-Mar-2017 by misscookie
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2017
    Thank you so much, Cookie. I'm pleased to be back, and to see so many old friends still here. Warmest regards, Marijke :o)
reply by misscookie on 24-Mar-2017
    Your'e very welcome. it's good to see your work in print again.
    Have a nice week end.
    Cookie


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Gorgeous photo of grandma and baby. Yes, you will write again, it is in our blood. A watched pot never boils, and when we walk away for a while, the dinner gets cooked. Nice to see you pop in with a little poem. I was wondering? XXK
Comment Written 22-Mar-2017 by Aussie
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2017
    Thanks, Kay. It is a nice photo. Thanks also for your kind comments and observations. Nice to see you're still here. Warmest regards, Marijke :o) xxxx


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-Very good artwork.
-Glad to see you, Marijke.
-Nice poem about how that
muse will return, and I know
you will be sharing more.
-You are a good writer.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2017 by Pam (respa)
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2017
    Thanks, Pam, for your kind comments and observations. Nice to see you're still here. Warmest regards, Marijke :o) xxxx
reply by Pam (respa) on 23-Mar-2017
    You are quite welcome.


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Hi Marijke, well you may be waiting for your muse but I think he has already arrived. A very nice poem in 8,6,8,6 syllable form maintained throughout, apart from line- 'Be it essay be it verse' which has seven syllables' - just a small detail in an otherwise lovely poem. Warm regards Dorothy x and keep writing.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2017 by Dorothy Farrell
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2017
    Thanks, Dorothy, for your kind comments and generous review. Warmest regards, Marijke :o) xxxx


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This sounds like a bad case of writer's block. It seems a must has hit and hopefully will stay for a long time. I like the repetition. It helps show how much writing means
to the speaker in the poem.

I like how the motion in the artwork shows how motion changes an object.

Keep writing

dragonpoet
Comment Written 22-Mar-2017 by dragonpoet
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2017
    Thanks, dragonpoet, for your kind comments and generous review. Warmest regards, Marijke :o)
reply by dragonpoet on 23-Mar-2017
    You are so kindly welcome.

    Enjoy your day

    dp


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Hooray .. there you are in great form my friend. what a delightfully encouraging poem you've created.. I'm so glad you let the pen take you by the heart and scribe this awesome little verse Marijke. Bet it felt good to create once more.. Keep the inspiration going .. ( when time permits).. You are a fabulous writer... sending bundles of happy smiles and hugs your way, luv mel xox
amazing artwork.. really grabs the eye ... cheers again.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2017 by melyuki
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2017
    Wow... thank you Mel, for your very generous review and your words of encouragement. Yes... I did it. Now to follow through. And yes, you are right, it did feel good. Short but sweet, I guess. Thanks again my friend, and sending you back bundles of happy smiles and hugs. Love and warmest regards, Marijke :o)


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Hi Marijke:

It is good to have you back with us. I had been wondering. When the muse hijacks our pen, it should be a crime... but if we lock them up, then where would we be? lol Your ab, cb rhyme scheme was delightful. I'll be looking forward to more soon!

Kim
Comment Written 22-Mar-2017 by ~Dovey
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2017
    Kim, thank you so much for your kind review and comments. Warmest regards, I look forward to catching up with all my 'old' friends on FS. Warmest regards, Marijke :o) xxx


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Welcome back! I was happy to see your name in my inbox. Muses sometimes take long sabbaticals but they always come back eventually. I enjoyed this clever writer's block poem

Good flow, fine rhyming. Good use of rhythmic repetition. Fine phonetics too!

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One day(,) I'll grab my pen


nice medley of F and W sounds here:

The words will flow - effortlessly

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Be it essay(,) be it verse

Perfect closing note:

But I am sure I'll write again
... for better or for worse

Implying you are 'married' to your muse, so to speak.

Nice!

Warmly, rd
Comment Written 21-Mar-2017 by rama devi
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2017
    Rama, thank you so much for your kind review and comments. Warmest regards, I look forward to catching up with all my 'old' friends on FS. Warmest regards, Marijke :o) xxx
reply by rama devi on 22-Mar-2017
    Thank you, Marijke - so nice you're back. Warmest Regards! xxx


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