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I have no more starts to give
I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem you captured my attention from the first word to the last
I had to smiling thinking when I'd move to as new house now an apartment the things I would known of those wall could talk
thank you for sharing
cookie
Comment Written 26-Jun-2019 by misscookie
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2019
    Miss Cookie... Hey... thanks so much for your star filled review on my poem... yours, Diana


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Yes, you have made All time best number 500. I don't know what the number means here.
It has come together very well with ABCB rhyme except for the last stanza which is ABCC rhyme. I enjoy all the explanations and stories associated with the seat. It certainly has a few tales to tell!
Comment Written 25-Jun-2019 by JanPerry
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2019
    Jan I have no idea what the number means... Hey... thanks so much for your star filled review on my poem... yours, Diana


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Yes, on occasion, I run into an old and uncared for park. I wonder as well of love professed, hearts broken, love made and children playing, swings a swaying and laughter everywhere. In some respects, these parks now remind me of old cemeteries long forgotten. But, what marvelous places they once were! Best wishes.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2019 by victor 66
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2019
    Hey Victor... thanks so much for your star filled review on my poem... yours, Diana
reply by victor 66 on 29-Jun-2019
    You are most welcome, Diana.


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This work has reached the exceptional level
In my opinion, a simply beautiful write, outstanding in every detail of its stunning rhyming rhythm - loved my read and appreciated the smooth flow of this lovely poem - a standard with this exquisite writer....
Comment Written 25-Jun-2019 by evesayshi
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2019
    Wow Eve... I do believe this is the best review I've ever received...I'm honored by your words... yours di
reply by evesayshi on 27-Jun-2019
    You are so welcome, Diana, my pleasure I assure you...Eve


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What a beautiful ode to this aging bench.
I love benches.
I have one that I sit on in the mornings,
and watch the birds and flowers.
It's an old antiqued one also....
your poem makes me wonder at it's stories.
Lovely,
Blessings...
Comment Written 25-Jun-2019 by Irish Rain
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2019
    He Irish... thanks so much for your star filled review on my poem... yours, Diana
reply by Irish Rain on 27-Jun-2019
    You're welcome!!


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It's so sad to see once elegant monuments to artistry allowed to run to wrack and ruin, like old buildings, only needing some renovation and TKC to return to their former glory. Old bench seats, (some donated by once prominent citizens) a beautfully orchestrated work here, with deftly crafted.stanzas glowing with articulation and elegance, rhyme and slant rhyme dominating, well done Di, blessings, Roy
Typo : parishioner(')s fears.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2019 by royowen
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2019
    Hey Roy... thanks so much for your star filled review on my poem... always a pleasure. yours, Diana
reply by royowen on 27-Jun-2019
    Well done


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This bench looks so sad and lonely. It seems that it had a busy life before it was ignored and forgotten by those who used it for their reasons. Maybe someone can cut back the weeds and revive its use. It looks like a good place to rest and think.

Keep writing

Joan
Comment Written 25-Jun-2019 by dragonpoet
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2019
    I know dragon poet... Hey... thanks so much for your star filled review on my poem... yours, Diana
reply by dragonpoet on 27-Jun-2019
    You're welcome, Diana.
    Joan


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This is truly lovely and such a hauntingly forlorn feeling to it. I felt such compassion for the bench I wanted to scoop it up and carry it away to my backyard where it could be fixed up and given a place of honor. Well done, my eloquent friend. Thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2019 by Mystic Angel 7777
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2019
    Thank you, thank you Mystic... I have much respect for your literary prowess... so, I'm honored and look forward to your posts as well... yours xoDi


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How time ravages all that was once sparkling new and of use, but I rather like the bench blending into the scene here as if it were being swallowed by the garden. Your pome reminisces here of times gone by and the visions this bench must have seen. A mix of rhymes and meter here with no clear form, but a very enjoyable poem, love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-Jun-2019 by Dolly'sPoems
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2019
    Hey Dolly always enjoy your Reviews... Jodi


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These verses say it all...The down-trodden and strollers once
lingered to gobble-down their lunch.
They've now forsaken this vintage throne
for shinier, benches unknown
even though ...This old wrought iron retreat
once enticed lovers to sit
Very eloquently penned. Loved it all.
Sylvia
Comment Written 25-Jun-2019 by Sylvia Page
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2019
    Sylvia thanks so much... and thanks so much for your star-filled review on my poem... yours, Diana
reply by Sylvia Page on 27-Jun-2019
    I think it is worth every star.


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