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Awesome Image by; Dreamer. And a most commendable message from the author. The Music Video, "Maksin-Somewhere in Time," is most impressive. Thank you, Ella for sharing your expertise with us here on FanStory. Keep your quill wet with ink and your juices flowing. Best wishes and God bless.
I liked this piece. The words are quite ethereal, dreamy - which fits the piece perfectly. Nice touches of whimsy and lightness.
where happiness breaths - breathes.
After reading, I think that 'Pillow of Dreams' is a very good poem.
I especially like the music video.
The image shown supports the poem. The background color selected goes well with the art and the color of font chosen.
Thanks for sharing your poetry.
Good luck with your future writing.
I've somehow missed this. It's a lovely poem, that says it all. It so important to show your true feelings. Life is too short and then it's gone. All the best Ulla:))x
HI Ella, OMG...it was so good to see you in my PM...have truly missed you sweet girl...you are so very right...when you find someone you love truly love...and you can trust and count on them in your life...fight for that person...they are worth it...I love your poem you...very nicely written...and I love your picture...glad to see you my friend...love to ya Linda xxo
Commendably written by a most beautiful lady. The Image by Dreamer halo's the grammar while making it crystal clear and most receptive to the reader. The Music
Video "Keep Your Eye On Me" by Tim McGraw/Faith Hill is awesome. I truly enjoyed this presentation, Ella. I truly miss you on FanStory. Thanks for sharing and God bless.
A very well-written poem. We giving up too quickly sometimes on our loved ones. It is always beautiful to see two old people together and still in love like they are teenagers. Glad to see you're back.
Great picture. Loved your poem, very sweet and simple, love doesn't have to be complicated to be good. I loved 'your honey lips still taste the same
like it was yesterday, darling' MaggieF
I like your "random poem", Ella. I love the night sky and the feel of the universe so vast and unknown. I know lots of writers insists on using capitalizations for every line, but have you ever thought of not using them on lines to give the reader a chance to read your enjambment lines? Just a thought...readers tend to make a full stop for caps. Loved your thoughts!
Outstanding job in the penning of this beautiful poem. I love anything written about the universe. The moon is so enchanting and I often will pen a poem about this beautiful creation of God. The artwork is quite stunning. Thanks for sharing a most enjoyable read my friend. Lots of love....Portia