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Fighting the Fog

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Your words express the virus very aptly as a fog, invisible, overpowering.
The poem ends on an uplifting note, 'boosting our fighting spirit." These words give a sense of hope in a changed world and encourage not to give in to despair and depression as isolation, especially for the elderly is so difficult to deal with. Company for many is paramount. Thank you for the encouraging words.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2020 by gingermo
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
    I very thankful for your kind review!! Stay safe!


Fighting the Fog

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Your written an excellent poem on fog for the contest
with a different approach from Carl Sandburg's Famous poem on fog.
I'm not really sure that fog is invisible.
It is normally seen, but makes other things invisible.
But still, an excellent poem, as we are fighting an invisible foe in the virus.
Excellent art to match.
Well done.
Best wishes to you.
Robert

Comment Written 21-Mar-2020 by rspoet Reviewed with blinders on.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
    Thanks so much for your review. I was playing with some not-so-normal ideas. Sometimes works, sometimes not!!! :)


Fighting the Fog

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Bring it on, Sir Corona in the fog... lol! ;) Love this offering for the contest this evening -- so much to 'stir up' there in just seven words!! ;) Best of luck to you at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 21-Mar-2020 by Y. M. Roger Reviewed with blinders on.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
    I'm very appreciative of your very nice review!!!


Persevere

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I like this. When things are good, we can enjoy the wonders of life. But when fear overtakes, we can no longer see the wonder. But your hope: we shall persevere.

Patricia
Comment Written 20-Mar-2020 by samandlancelot Reviewed with blinders on.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
    Thanks so much for your kind review!


Persevere

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Hello, my friend,

Beautiful 5/7/5 hope poem contest entry. The presentation is awesome. The syllable count is good. A good connection between lines. Good luck with the contest.

gypsy
Comment Written 19-Mar-2020 by Gypsy Blue Rose Reviewed with blinders on.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
    I'm very appreciative of your wonderful review. Thank you so very much!


Persevere

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My favorite part of the poem was, "seem unapproachable now
We shall persevere", because it shows difficulty and striving towards better even with difficulty present!

The Lord led me to these verses after I read this,

James 1:12 New International Version (NIV)

12 Blessed is the one who perseveres under trial because, having stood the test, that person will receive the crown of life that the Lord has promised to those who love him.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2020 by Fonda Little Reviewed with blinders on.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
    I'm blessed by your review!


Persevere

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Yes we shall persevere. I enjoyed reading your commentary. Thank you so much for your encouraging poem and imagery you selected is point on.
Kind regards.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2020 by moonsunrise Reviewed with blinders on.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
    I'm so grateful for your kind review!


Persevere

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I think this is a good entry for the 5-7-5 Hope writing prompt.
This short piece tells us to perservere.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 19-Mar-2020 by Sharon Haiste Reviewed with blinders on.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
    Thanks so much!


Persevere

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Your graphic and words together look like an inspirational poster you would buy to hang at work. You have a very positive message.Very nice job. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2020 by Earl Corp Reviewed with blinders on.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
    What sweet words, thank you very very much!


Persevere

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Yes we shall. I love how you have a strong and upbeat poem when it is most needed. Excellent word choices. Nice image to accompany it. I enjoyed reading your poem. Well done!
Comment Written 19-Mar-2020 by Michael Ludwinder II Reviewed with blinders on.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
    Thanks so much; glad you enjoyed it!


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