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Your words express the virus very aptly as a fog, invisible, overpowering.
The poem ends on an uplifting note, 'boosting our fighting spirit." These words give a sense of hope in a changed world and encourage not to give in to despair and depression as isolation, especially for the elderly is so difficult to deal with. Company for many is paramount. Thank you for the encouraging words.
Your written an excellent poem on fog for the contest
with a different approach from Carl Sandburg's Famous poem on fog.
I'm not really sure that fog is invisible.
It is normally seen, but makes other things invisible.
But still, an excellent poem, as we are fighting an invisible foe in the virus.
Excellent art to match.
Best wishes to you.
Bring it on, Sir Corona in the fog... lol! ;) Love this offering for the contest this evening -- so much to 'stir up' there in just seven words!! ;) Best of luck to you at the polls! ;)
I like this. When things are good, we can enjoy the wonders of life. But when fear overtakes, we can no longer see the wonder. But your hope: we shall persevere.
Hello, my friend,
Beautiful 5/7/5 hope poem contest entry. The presentation is awesome. The syllable count is good. A good connection between lines. Good luck with the contest.
My favorite part of the poem was, "seem unapproachable now
We shall persevere", because it shows difficulty and striving towards better even with difficulty present!
The Lord led me to these verses after I read this,
James 1:12 New International Version (NIV)
12 Blessed is the one who perseveres under trial because, having stood the test, that person will receive the crown of life that the Lord has promised to those who love him.
Yes we shall persevere. I enjoyed reading your commentary. Thank you so much for your encouraging poem and imagery you selected is point on.
I think this is a good entry for the 5-7-5 Hope writing prompt.
This short piece tells us to perservere.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Your graphic and words together look like an inspirational poster you would buy to hang at work. You have a very positive message.Very nice job. Good luck in the contest.
Yes we shall. I love how you have a strong and upbeat poem when it is most needed. Excellent word choices. Nice image to accompany it. I enjoyed reading your poem. Well done!