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At the University
Chapter 11 of the book Dead man walking

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The writer gradually builds the pace of this chapter. The writer transitions the events smoothly and uses good balance with the characters. The writer raises the intensity a little as the writer brings this chapter to an ending that has a little humor.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2013 by Righteous Riter Reviewed with blinders on.


At the University
Chapter 11 of the book Dead man walking

Excellent
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I think this is the first chapter I have seen of this book. Sounds like an interesting story. It is well written, the dialogue is easy to follow and I could find no obvious errors.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2013 by CR Delport


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