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BLABBER Brain!
Chapter 133 of the book In the Midst of Good and Evil

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LOL! Quite an interesting rambling of rhyme and fun here -- gotta love those offerings that help you lose yourself from the present realities! ;) Thanx for sharing! ;)
Comment Written 06-Aug-2020 by Y. M. Roger


BLABBER Brain!
Chapter 133 of the book In the Midst of Good and Evil

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Keep writing forever, it sets the soul free. But take your time to enjoy the journey. What a wonderfully written poem. Best of luck with your writing!

Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 04-Aug-2020 by papa55mike


IsKidnappingaPraygoLadyAlwaysBad
Chapter 138 of the book Volume 4

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Nice story I enjoyed reading it. I like the voice of this piece, the narrator I guess. He has a clear Message an flows well. Thanks for sharing this and have yourself a really great day
Comment Written 24-Jun-2020 by oliver818


IsKidnappingaPraygoLadyAlwaysBad
Chapter 138 of the book Volume 4

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Unless I missed the 'period' in there somewhere, this entire posting is one long sentence... I think you would have more success getting your message across if you followed grammatical correctness: it's like political correctness only much more important when it comes to people actually understanding your written word. :) ;)
Comment Written 24-Jun-2020 by Y. M. Roger


158 Silver Wings
Chapter 197 of the book Volume 7

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This is a very strong poem that makes the most of complex ideas and metaphors! You are able to convey strong emotions skilfully and the form of the poem contributes to the overall effect.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2020 by Anya Trofimova Reviewed with blinders on.


How Long?!!!!!!!
Chapter 138 of the book Volume 5

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This was so readable and so current. It was a poem about our strange and unforgettable times, times we will not soon forget. Hahaha. I should be asleep. What am I doing? (I think satchel is misspelled unless that is actually a different word.) Otherwise, a splendid poem in every way.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2020 by MissMerri


How Long?!!!!!!!
Chapter 138 of the book Volume 5

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Good one, dear friend. I enjoyed your wit and flowing stream of consciousness style. Stroke of genius line:

A meme of a fireman won't do!



great rhymes, as usual.

Spag suggestion:

and so it goes(-- or ;) we'll make it through


I think satchels is misspelled here (particularly love those rhymes!):

without buckling down and battening hatches
and hoarding toilet paper, masks, and matches
like gold dust stored in silver sachles.


Innovative rhymes here too:

sick and get others sick in return,
some all the way to the urn,


And here:

"Boo Hoo?"

"Half-True."


All right!!!! Alright!

Love and light,
bbb


Comment Written 15-Apr-2020 by rama devi


158 Silver Wings
Chapter 197 of the book Volume 7

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Interesting Poem about the fragile quality of life. I like how you expressed in a creative way how rain falls on the just and the unjust in the midst of certain circumstances. That is a real life story that turned instantly from a good day into a horrifying one. Bill
Comment Written 15-Apr-2020 by Bill Pinder


itssolikethisyourebouts2waygetit
Chapter 141 of the book Volume 3

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Though I understand the premise of the presentation - to make your reader concentrate on the words rather than just speed through - the fact that it runs into your profile description because there are no line breaks makes it impossible to even do that. There needs to be at least one line break so the poem can have a hope of being followed from beginning to end.... I do applaud your ingenuity! ;)
Comment Written 14-Mar-2020 by Y. M. Roger


Get THIS!
Chapter 137 of the book Volume 2

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Quite the unique offering... although I do like the employment of 'farked' (wink, wink)... ;) Thanx for sharing your expression today! ;) ;)
Be sure to pop back in there and eliminate the gnome graffiti from your title tag line... :) ;)
Comment Written 14-Mar-2020 by Y. M. Roger


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