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Springs Blossoming!
Chapter 8 of the book "Restorative Appeal"

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Two things strike me about this poem. Firstly the painting you have chosen to illustrate it is beautiful and so luminous, it takes my breath away. Secondly your concept of hearing (rather than seeing) a palette of colour is a delight.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2021 by Katherine M. Kean


Springs Blossoming!
Chapter 8 of the book "Restorative Appeal"

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Ricky1024
I enjoyed your fun poem and how you described each one example
What?
Something also is now Sprouting?
Jump for Joy!
The Daffodils are singing and shouting!
Those Trumpeters do they so dare?
Yellow of course is there Fare!
Comment Written 09-Apr-2021 by Gert sherwood


Spilled Coffee
Chapter 6 of the book "Restorative Appeal"

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I like this short poem, which I found to be rather surprising. My favourite line was
the journey is the most interesting part
This was very philosophical.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2021 by Katherine M. Kean


Spilled Coffee
Chapter 6 of the book "Restorative Appeal"

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I like your words and agree with you here, the journey of life is the most interesting part of life. The journey can be fun yet have many twists and turns as well.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2021 by mermaids


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