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Revelation Reveals

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Thank you Pharp for such a wonderful rendition of Revelation. Yes what is written in the Bible will come true. There is no doubt about it. Let the world repent and turn to the Lord. Let us all Christians pray for the salvation of the whole world.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2021 by Kitbok Nongkhlaw


Faithfulness

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Portia, This is such a beautiful and well written true poem from your great big heart of love for our Lord, Jesus Christ! I miss seeing you on here. I hope and pray all is with with you and your family. May God bless and protect you all! love and Merry Christmas! Teri
Comment Written 22-Dec-2020 by Teri7


Faithfulness

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This is truly a beautiful poem, and so well constructed too. You've followed the restrictive rules without making anything in your content seem restricted. It flows smoothly and has so much meaning. I loved it. Oh, and congratulations for winning a prize too. Certainly deserved!
Comment Written 26-Oct-2020 by MissMerri


One Blue Rose

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So beautifully dramatic yet poignantly sad, this is a very touching and well written poem. I can only hope that it is based on the writer's imagination, rather than experience.
The illustration, the colors, the rhymes, the meter and the very descriptive words all convey the struggle of a woman overcoming betrayal. Very well written and presented!
I miss you, my friend, and hope you and your family are well -- lifting you in prayer!
Comment Written 19-Aug-2020 by Mary Kay Bonfante


All About Love

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And may we all grow in ability to love! There were echoes of 1 Corthinians 13 in your poem and what a time where we need love so much!
Small suggestion:
"Love at no time encourage hate" (encourages)
Comment Written 26-Jul-2020 by lyenochka


Faithfulness

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Amen! "Flawless doctrine reveals faithfulness!" I love that statement. Great job with this pleiades poem. May we all be feasting on the Lord's Word and fervently seeking His strength and peace. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 26-Jul-2020 by lyenochka


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