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Apples!

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HI Rose, I just got back on for a minute...I am still at my folks home and they don't have the net.....I jump in when I go to my brothers...I hope you are doing well...so good to see you ....I love your poem...reminds me of Autumn...and apple pie...so nicely written sweet lady...luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 22-Oct-2015 by l.raven


Apples!

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We all like apple. It makes great deserts and eating.
Now and them it is a pity that there is so much of them....even down my lane, that they are everywhere on the road and lane , kicked and abused by the children.
A pity.
Benny Beeharry.
Ps could I kindly add that I am always delighted toread the writings that come in my box and review them and this even if I get only 2 cents for the review. But i would certainly love to see my writing be reviewed too in return.

be reviewed too.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2015 by Benny Beeharry


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As I read your words it made me think of emotions reflected in the trees. The way I feel sometimes, changing moods, green and fresh with life then down as the falling leaves. Also refreshed with briskness and wonderfully full of new life in spring.
Nicely written.
Rubylou
Comment Written 18-Oct-2015 by Rubylou


Apples!

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Oh and the delicious treats we can make with those wonderful apples. Yet on their own they are fantastic as well.
Great ABC for the contest and timely right for the season.
I realize this review is a bit late, I've been away but it is certainly worth the read.
Rubylou
Comment Written 18-Oct-2015 by Rubylou


fading away

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HI Rose, I am so I am so late reviewing...I am at my folks and they don't have the net...but I will get caught up...I bet there are a lot who can relate to your poem...feeling like no one can see them...what a awful feeling...sooooo very well written...and the perfect picture...luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 17-Oct-2015 by l.raven


Apples!

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Good work. Dunno where you are? In Australia we have Jonathons, Delicious, Granny Smith Apples (Green for cooking) I lovel Jonathons but I hate "delicious" which I think is a misnomer. They are mostly powdery and a kind of fake sweetness about them.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2015 by Sankey


Apples!

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Nicely done! Very descriptive. I like how you emphasized the deliciousnes of apples by the repetition throughout your poem. Very good job!
Comment Written 15-Oct-2015 by RYME4U


Apples!

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I enjoy your description of apples. Colourfully different is thought provoking in regards to the fruit itself.
If the last line said something like

Eat them right down to the core

instead, I would have found this interesting with the flow of words beginning with a capital going in alphabetical order from too to bottom in sequence A, B, C, D, E

Love
Comment Written 15-Oct-2015 by Naham Mills


Apples!

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A very enjoyable ABC poem about apples and the picture of the shiny red one is just beautiful. I love apples especially cooked ones with greek yoghurt.

Well done
Mary
Comment Written 15-Oct-2015 by Jackarrie


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