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Hi Nancy!
Oh, I am thrilled to see this lovely photo. You all look so happy and healthy. The girls are beautiful, Nancy. I know how proud you are of them. It's always nice to see an intact, loving, nuclear family. I am proud of you.

Love your sweet song, and am encouraged by it. A great reminder to look up :)
Hugs,
Lucy
Comment Written 27-Oct-2020 by Lucy de Welles


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Hi Nancy!
This is a lovely loop poem. Very alive and flows around the loops so beautifully. You write with such style and grace. And inspiration. Love the photo, colorful, happy, light. This poem continuously builds from one line to the next all the way to the end. A wholeness.
Well done!
hugs, Lucy
Comment Written 24-Oct-2020 by Lucy de Welles


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Amen FlyLikeaneagle, on everything you said. There is no mountain of trouble we cannot flyover; no high ill of sorrows that stands in our
way of comfort; no cloud of doubt that we cannot fly through. And one day soon we will fly up in the cloud at the call of Jesus.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2020 by GE Parson


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flylikeaneagle: the sentiment soothed my soul. Attempting to sustain a rhythm along with the rhyme was impossible due to the very long lines. Most of the lines seemed to indicate a need for two lines within one line. Or, perhaps, I am just getting so very old I can't keep up any more! Lol All your family are all well and safe. Linda
Comment Written 21-Oct-2020 by livelylinda


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Nancy,

What a cool family picture! I hope you printed this out and framed it front and center. It's so good!

Favorite line:
Spread the good news, the love of Jesus makes everything new.

Smart piece. Thanks so much and good luck!
Comment Written 21-Oct-2020 by robyn corum


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This is a delightful poem and I thought the picture was really cute. I enjoyed the poem very much and loved the beat. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing. Stay safe.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2020 by dmt1967


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God loves us, but He really wants us to love Him in return, it is the one deepest desire, He has given us everything, the greatest thing we can be sure of is knowing the only thing He wants is to acknowledge Him and adore Him, for what He is. We can do no less than adore Him, well done Nancy, beautifully written blessings Roy
Comment Written 21-Oct-2020 by royowen


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Well done Nancy this is an excellent loop poetry entry. You've used great poetic language, and the poetic looping is a very good effort, and is certainly a very good entry, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 21-Oct-2020 by royowen


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A very well-written rhyming poem about the grace of God who takes us to higher places on His wings that we can soar like an eagle with joy and without cares.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2020 by Sandra du Plessis


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A very well-written loop poem about the topic of light that is for many a source of life. Where there is light there is no darkness and light brings joy and happiness.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2020 by Sandra du Plessis


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