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Lion of Gory Salvation Story.
Chapter 5 of the book The Heartbeat of God

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 Wow this s a long one
Yet, your words were great.
If you took something out I believe we would miss the powerful message within your heart.
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2014 by misscookie

Lion of Gory Salvation Story.
Chapter 5 of the book The Heartbeat of God

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 What a poem! You've covered everything, I'd say. So right: take Jesus with you wherever you go and fear not standing up for Him in the marketplace, the school, the street, wherever!

Really fine poem!

Mike
Comment Written 26-Sep-2014 by mikemagine Reviewed with blinders on.

A Puppy's Prayer

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 Fresh out of six but you have it anyway. I think they know who cares and who does not. My little 5# always knows when we are about to leave. Well done , poet.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2014 by Ben Colder

From generation to generation
Chapter 4 of the book The Heartbeat of God

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 I like the message within your poem
All glory to the Father and the Son
Some of todays children are so blinded and listen with deaf ears.
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2014 by misscookie

From generation to generation
Chapter 4 of the book The Heartbeat of God

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 This is a very good poem you have penned. You have used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. A joy to read and review. hugs, teri
Comment Written 25-Sep-2014 by Teri7

From generation to generation
Chapter 4 of the book The Heartbeat of God

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 HI Charlieboy, from generation to generation we teach are kids the way of the Lord....as it should be...letting them know His home is their home...very beautiful poem...and very well expressed...well written...and a stunning picture...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 25-Sep-2014 by l.raven

From generation to generation
Chapter 4 of the book The Heartbeat of God

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 What a beautiful prayer...I pray for my children and the generations to come for them to love Jesus...well done..beautiful picture...I am my beloved's and He is mine..
God bless...
Comment Written 25-Sep-2014 by kiwijenny

A Puppy's Prayer

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 Typos...cant...can't ....wont .....won't
I love the poem of a sweet puppy...whose photo is adorable...I love the appeal,to God....well done
God bless
Comment Written 25-Sep-2014 by kiwijenny

Redemption Story

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 Excellent tribute to our Lord and your wise decision. Reading the spirit during the anointing of preaching is something the Holy Spirit relishes doing. He set you free. One of His specialties. Blessings to you Bro.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2014 by Ben Colder

Redemption Story

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 Now this is deep. There is a message for everyone in all walks in life.
You had my attention from the first line to the last.
Have a blessed Sunday.
Cookie
Comment Written 21-Sep-2014 by misscookie

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