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That is an excellent poem! Good luck in the contest. That takes guts to admit that vanity can be a problem. Adding the Idea of dying from spandex is funny.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2019 by Bill Pinder Reviewed with blinders on.


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Dear Mystery Poet,

Cute, cute, cute -- except for the fact that I am totally claustrophobic! I've actually BEEN in that situation (more than once) and it's dreadful!! The ending was nice and cute, thank goodness, which helped me breathe again. Thanks and good luck!
Comment Written 29-Mar-2019 by robyn corum Reviewed with blinders on.


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Oh I do like your epitaph! Are you out of that dress yet? This is why we women of a certain age and size always need to go shopping with a friend. Loved your poem.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2019 by LisaMay Reviewed with blinders on.


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HAHAHAHAHA. Now this would be a bad way to go, but it would bring laughter to those who remained to read the obit. Delightful poem, and I especially liked the part about "I had hoped for a slimmer image/to impress strangers." That's a very deep and thought-provoking two lines. I really like this entry a lot. I bet it's going to put you out in front in this contest. xo
Comment Written 27-Mar-2019 by Rachelle Allen Reviewed with blinders on.


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He he he, this made me laugh! This has happened to me so many times in the changing room! I have tried something on, it's a bit tight and I just can't get out of it! Panic sets in and then no matter what you do, the dress won't budge! You made me smile, love Dolly x
Comment Written 27-Mar-2019 by Dolly'sPoems Reviewed with blinders on.


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You have penned a very humorous scenario. A great artwork selection as well.
I have experienced that situation with my girlfriend but I knew I better not
complain about it.
A funny posting, best of luck!
Comment Written 27-Mar-2019 by Rmocruz Reviewed with blinders on.


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This was a good write. I love it and it had humor in it. I can picture the scene now and I'm sure it has happened before and will happen again. That's why I like loose clothing. Nice job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2019 by 24chas Reviewed with blinders on.


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Ha ha ha ha ha ha ha
Oh yes...I hate trying on clothes in the dressing room... there was one dress I could only stand in...sitting forget about it...lol
I'm still chuckling...though at the time I'm sure it wasn't funny
God bless
Comment Written 27-Mar-2019 by kiwijenny Reviewed with blinders on.


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Hi Contest Author,

Ha ha ha! This is a really funny poem and a great mirror conteest entry. Vanity is, indeed, a toxic dynamic, yet is fueled constantly by patriarchy's objectification of women. Thanks for sharing and good luck. Jan
Comment Written 27-Mar-2019 by HealingMuse Reviewed with blinders on.


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Hi Contest Author,

Very true, for sure! Knowing someone is better off still doesn't keep us from missing that person. It's a tough dynamic to deal with. This is a very good contest entry that should do well. Best of luck and thanks for sharing. Jan
Comment Written 26-Mar-2019 by HealingMuse Reviewed with blinders on.


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