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A Groom And Bride
Chapter 52 of the book 38. Nature poems

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I admired your Minute Poem as it captured this spring scene with the birds being so active. Your matching picture was perfect, and I enjoyed all of your rhymes- Joan
Comment Written 29-May-2020 by Joan E.


Wonderful blessings
Chapter 339 of the book Little Good Morning Quotes

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It's another May Gray day here, but I choose to be joyful and have started out well with the help of your 5-7-5. I enjoyed the wise and appropriate words in the illustration you selected as well. Smiles- Joan
Comment Written 29-May-2020 by Joan E.


A Groom And Bride
Chapter 52 of the book 38. Nature poems

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A Groom And Bride
by Sandra du Plessis

Hello Sandra

Lovely minute poem about a bird couple looking for privacy and a place to nest. How beautiful. And they found that place in your tree.
Comment Written 29-May-2020 by Gypsy Blue Rose


Wonderful blessings
Chapter 339 of the book Little Good Morning Quotes

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This is a very nice and very well written true 5-5-7 poem. You used very good and very true heart felt words. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 29-May-2020 by Teri7


A Groom And Bride
Chapter 52 of the book 38. Nature poems

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Sandra, This is a very well written and very nice minute poem you have penned about the bride and groom birds. I love the art work you chose and your great descriptive words. Thanks for sharing. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 29-May-2020 by Teri7


A Groom And Bride
Chapter 52 of the book 38. Nature poems

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Hello Sandra
Very, very good - a delightful impression of the events outside your window.
It is a confidently-written piece in a difficult form - I find the short line rhymes can be hard to make 'meaningful', but you have a good entry here.
I wish you well in the contest and with your continued writing.
cheers
phill
Comment Written 29-May-2020 by phill doran


A Groom And Bride
Chapter 52 of the book 38. Nature poems

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This is such a simple song describing one of Spring's delights--nesting birds. The Speaker describes the pair as "groom and bride," a nice metaphor for young humans starting their lives together. Anyway, this minute poem put a smile on my face. Rod
Comment Written 29-May-2020 by RodG Reviewed with blinders on.


A Groom And Bride
Chapter 52 of the book 38. Nature poems

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Great little minute poem with personification of the birds as the subject. I think the photo choice is great. I would only suggest un-capitalizing Spring to spring. Thank you for a super example of a minute poem.
Comment Written 29-May-2020 by CrystieCookie999


A Groom And Bride
Chapter 52 of the book 38. Nature poems

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I rarely give a six for a minute poem though they are my favortite as they are challenging, more so than people imagine. This is done excellently and the rhyming and flow are set to cause effect
Comment Written 29-May-2020 by Barb Hensongispsaca


A Groom And Bride
Chapter 52 of the book 38. Nature poems

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Congratulations on this lovely, sentimental piece. It always cheers my heart spending time watching bird couples going about their daily business. Good luck with the competition; I expect you'll do well.
Comment Written 29-May-2020 by A Little Bird


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