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Pillow of Dreams

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HI Ella, sorry I don't have any sixes sweet girl...******...I love your poem...I love to dream of places like this...and often wish I could be stuck on an island with a true love...sigh...dreams...I love your poem...and love your picture...Love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 09-Jun-2017 by l.raven


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Hi Ella, this is beautiful words you've chosen here. So they just came to you? What a wonderful declaration of love. I loved it. All the best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 09-Jun-2017 by Ulla


Pillow of Dreams

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Hey there, Ella! It's great to read your poetry again and have you share your words with us again. I hope all is well. Your poem is lovely and who wouldn't want to be rocked by the stars? The presentation is great, and music is from one of my all-time favorite movies.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)
Comment Written 09-Jun-2017 by IndianaIrish


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Hi, little Ella. Good o see you here. I have not been too well so just easing back.

A lovely light write in which the heart speaks volumes of the person you are.
Bravo.
My best wishes.
RG
Comment Written 07-Jun-2017 by RGstar


Pillow of Dreams

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Hi Ella,

You had me in your title, "Pillow of Dreams". Makes me want to crawl back in bed and get lost in my dreams.

I'm not a free verse gal, but I enjoyed your word choices, and the glimpse you give the reader without going overboard. You captured the dreamy quality in a satisfying way.

I'm looking at line 4 - "where happiness (breaths)" - I think it should be spelled breathes.

Thank you for showing me the way to my day dreams today :)

Comment Written 07-Jun-2017 by Joy Graham


Pillow of Dreams

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Awesome Image by; Dreamer. And a most commendable message from the author. The Music Video, "Maksin-Somewhere in Time," is most impressive. Thank you, Ella for sharing your expertise with us here on FanStory. Keep your quill wet with ink and your juices flowing. Best wishes and God bless.
Bill (Junglefighter)
Comment Written 07-Jun-2017 by Commando


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Hi there,

I liked this piece. The words are quite ethereal, dreamy - which fits the piece perfectly. Nice touches of whimsy and lightness.

where happiness breaths - breathes.

Comment Written 07-Jun-2017 by giraffmang


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After reading, I think that 'Pillow of Dreams' is a very good poem.
I especially like the music video.
The image shown supports the poem. The background color selected goes well with the art and the color of font chosen.
Thanks for sharing your poetry.
Good luck with your future writing.
-Nicole-
Comment Written 07-Jun-2017 by Nikki-Nicole


Love That Never Died

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I've somehow missed this. It's a lovely poem, that says it all. It so important to show your true feelings. Life is too short and then it's gone. All the best Ulla:))x
Comment Written 06-Jun-2017 by Ulla


Love That Never Died

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HI Ella, OMG...it was so good to see you in my PM...have truly missed you sweet girl...you are so very right...when you find someone you love truly love...and you can trust and count on them in your life...fight for that person...they are worth it...I love your poem you...very nicely written...and I love your picture...glad to see you my friend...love to ya Linda xxo
Comment Written 04-Jun-2017 by l.raven


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