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Spirits connect with a chosen few who then channel their thoughts for mainly positive reasons.
Another enthralling read my friend that had the hairs on my neck standing up.
Very well written with such few words.
How verrry strange. Could it have been a live person? Or are you sure it was a voice not attached to a physical body? If a ghost, he picked a bad time to leave, while you were distracted. :)
Thank you for sharing this. I think that sometimes strange occurrences happen sometimes to those who dabble in things that have to do with the occult, and those who desire from the heart to be close to the Lord and to do His will. Your situation sounds like the latter. This was well written and well done.
This is an interesting piece of prose dear tier! You described the setting rather well. And the end is very unpredictable. It did draw me in.
Thanks for sharing!
Blessings and a big squeeze!
Hello, this is my first read of any of your poems and I love it for its
straight-from-the-heart love and sympathy. I might have loved it a bit more with a few more rhymes. Congratulations on your ALL TIME BEST award which I find with some affinity to my poem VALENTINE's DAY
in the acrostic contest of VALENTINE POETRY. Take a peek, let me know what you think. Some Fanstorians say its the first "triplicate acrostic" ever written on Fanstory. Love and Blessings, john
Ah Tier your 100 word true story is perfect and I see that it's ready all time best
I can see why the last lines are so frightening.
and I do hope hopefully he said good bye for good
I think this is a good entry for the 'True Story' writing prompt.
Your story is well told and clear, and a little bit spooky.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Well, if to scare and intrigue was your purpose, you certainly succeeded with me. You wrote a story that pulled me in as the reader, then turned around and ended in a totall different fashion than I'd believed while I read.
Then in the author's notes, you grabbed me again and put me squarely on your orbit with the passage below. I hope when the book is out, you'll let me know where I can get it. I have to find out what this is all about!
>You will have to buy the book when I complete it. However, I did not cause these things to happen to me as I do not mess with or dabble with spiritism. One of my grandparents did though, many years ago and sometimes this is all it takes.<
I enjoy reading about spirits and messages. I do wonder why they choose you. Since it keeps happening. Does it frighten you or are you ok with it, because you know why they are around.
I have also seen on two occasions spirits in my house and I found them very peaceful. I had never nor have I seen anything like it but it did not scare me in anyway. One was an older woman and the other a small boy. Both came at night and I woke up and each time they were standing at the head of my bed looking at me.
When I made eye contact with the woman, dressed in white, short blond hair, I'd say 60's, with white light all around her, she simply looked at me turned at walked/faded away. Next same thing, woke up and a little boy I'd say 8-10, overall's one suspender hanging down, white light surrounding him. When I saw him I got up on my elbow and just looked at him, he just looked back and began to walk backwards, turn to leave but look over his shoulder one last time at me.
He too faded.
It was two of the most peaceful and fascinating experiences.
Your spirit spoke that must have been a bit scary.
I enjoyed this story you shared.
A short and strange little tale. the power of prayer and faith, they say, can move mountains.
After saying good-bye - goodbye can be a single word here.