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You have written a happy and creative birthday poem for Barbara. I like your smooth flow of words and lines. "That cakes for all of us" is a great line. Let's celebrate this lady's birthday! Excellent poetic form and use of words.
you share your gift for that gift of a friend. your words and your meaning was spiritually a gift of expression. your poem was a joy to read. thanks for the read. "your so vein" means mood or humor.
your so vein
An excellent good will poem Tina, I do know at least three Barbaras on-site, but I've always thought that writing birthday poems is a marvellous thing anyway. Beautifully written Tina, well done, blessings Roy
-Lovely image and
great presentation, Tina.
-You have written a very
good poem for Barb!
-I like the rhyme and
smooth flow, and humor.
-I like the reference to
her name and how it won't rhyme,
and the line about being sweet.
-Very well done; I think Barbara
will love it.
-Hope you are doing well.
"Present for Barb", is a well-written, and entertaining piece. It was a pleasure to both read and review, this talented poet's work. I look forward to seeing your next post.