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Presents for Barb
Chapter 19 of the book Blessings for Barbara

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You have written a happy and creative birthday poem for Barbara. I like your smooth flow of words and lines. "That cakes for all of us" is a great line. Let's celebrate this lady's birthday! Excellent poetic form and use of words.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2020 by mermaids


Presents for Barb
Chapter 19 of the book Blessings for Barbara

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you share your gift for that gift of a friend. your words and your meaning was spiritually a gift of expression. your poem was a joy to read. thanks for the read. "your so vein" means mood or humor.

your so vein
godlucifer
Comment Written 29-Oct-2020 by godlucifer


Presents for Barb
Chapter 19 of the book Blessings for Barbara

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An excellent good will poem Tina, I do know at least three Barbaras on-site, but I've always thought that writing birthday poems is a marvellous thing anyway. Beautifully written Tina, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 29-Oct-2020 by royowen


Presents for Barb
Chapter 19 of the book Blessings for Barbara

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-Lovely image and
great presentation, Tina.
-You have written a very
good poem for Barb!
-I like the rhyme and
smooth flow, and humor.
-I like the reference to
her name and how it won't rhyme,
and the line about being sweet.
-Very well done; I think Barbara
will love it.
-Hope you are doing well.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2020 by Pam (respa)


Presents for Barb
Chapter 19 of the book Blessings for Barbara

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"Present for Barb", is a well-written, and entertaining piece. It was a pleasure to both read and review, this talented poet's work. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2020 by duchessofdrumborg


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